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Re: Lukewarm Summer Air
First of all, the following of what I'm going to say isn't to be taken too offense. I'm only stating my opinion. Frankly, I didn't find it funny at all. ...
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Re: All Week Long (Ashley's Schedule)
I frankly didn't like this I felt it was a bit inappropriate. That's a lot coming from me since I say a lot of inappropriate stuff. Talking about drugs and ...
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Re: Exception to the Expectation
Truthfully, this wasn't funny at all. It wasn't exactly boring but it wasn't exactly grappeling. The only funny part is paragraph four: 'I want to be an adorable killer; Victims ...
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Re: Magic Trick For Frank.
This was actually really funny, I'm shocked to find something that's humorous In poetry, I got done reading several stuff similar to yours in the humor section that wasn't funny ...
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Re: Sex and Romance Can Die
Sorry to say this, and I hope you won't take offense. This wasn't funny at all, frankly I don't even think it belongs in the humor section. I found it ...
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Re: Book Report on Emily of New Moon
Alright, honesty this wasn't funny to me. I was a little bored and didn't really find it interesting. I don't think it was really worth reading. I'm not afraid to ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Vice President Larry is Sworn In
Oh gods, this was hilarious! I found the humor funny and different. Most people wouldn't but I like humor like this. You've earned yourself a like, it was interesting, funny, ...
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Re: The eternal quest
Why is it rated 18+ for language? There's no bad-language in there. Also why's it in the Humor section? I didn't really find this funny, frankly I didn't really understand ...
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Re: I'ma Cop
I laughed so hard when reading this, it was really funny. It would do good as a comedy act, it usually takes a lot to make me laugh so this ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Jasper Chp.1
It was really short, and it ended abruptly. It could've gone on a little longer I didn't really like it that much. It wasn't really interesting, and it didn't grab ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Friends work 1: attempt at suspense
I actually quite liked it, but it was really hard to read. So much it gave me a headache just trying, paragraphs need to be separated. I liked the suspense, ...
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Re: I Have Found Paradise
It's not horrible, but it's not one of you best. I'm a fan of your writing, but truthfully I didn't really like this one. I felt kind of lost, and ...
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Re: The Pact, Chapter One, Part One
This was interesting, I actually quite liked it. It kept me entertained, I wasn't really bored at all, which is good! I went over this, and I'm curious to know ...
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Re: Wheels of Freedom
Hi there! This is Scarlet here to review! I loved this! I didn't think It was going to interesting, truthfully I thought it was going to be boring. When she ...
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Re: Sipping Orange Juice
Hi there! This is Scarlet here to review your work! It wasn't so bad, I've read worse. I didn't particularly 'love' it but I didn't hate it either. Frankly it ...
Jun 29, 2014
