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ScarletDreams14

  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: I hate dogs.

    No idea why I'm reviewing this but I couldn't help myself. Nitpicks first... I doubt it has any need for grammar or punctuation but I'm going to tear this apart ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Hecate's Plan: prologue

    OMFG, YUSSSS I'm going to review the hell out of this! *squeals* Okay okay, first off nitpicks. No serious spelling issues but one thing... Areas laughed It absolutely ticks my ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Field Slaves

    Hey there! Scarlet here for a review, man it's been a while since I've bothered reviewing. Anyhow I can't guarantee the accuracy of my reviews but I'll do my best. ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Other Re: She's gone

    Hey there! Scarlet here for a review, man it's been a while since I've bothered reviewing. Anyhow I can't guarantee the accuracy of my reviews but I'll do my best. ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Betrayal

    Hey there, Scarlet here to review! Alright, nitpicks first! What is the cost?To retrieve what may never be gained, Shaken beyond belief of the wrongdoing that has succumb them. -Wrong ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: By The Way, Your Mascara Is Smeared

    Hey there, Scarlet here to review! As far as I can see this poem has no grammatical or punctual issues that really stand out. This poem is rather depressing, but ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Our Truth

    Hey there, Scarlet here to review! This was truly beautiful but before I list the pro's I have to go over the cons... - There is a big run on ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: DELETED

    Hey there! Scarlet here to review. So just sit tight, relax and enjoy the show! Nitpicks first... She nodded turned back to stare out the window. The storm of lights ...

    Jul 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: REDACTED

    Hey there! Scarlet here to review. So just sit tight, relax and enjoy the show! Nitpicks first... She huffed in irritation and typed a reply to Janie's third text in ...

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: DELETED

    Hey there! Scarlet here to review. So just sit tight, relax and enjoy the show! Nitpicks first... She was standing in a section devoted to folktales and held in her ...

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: REDACTED

    Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Yeah, yeah I know. Review day is over but I just can't help myself! Perfect punctuation and grammar. This gave me a little prick ...

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: Love strinks~Part 1

    Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Yeah, yeah I know. Review day is over but I just can't help myself! Beautiful! This just about brought me to the brink of ...

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: There is too much

    Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Yeah, yeah I know. Review day is over but I just can't help myself! I see why you left It out, Aley is educating ...

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Silverfish

    Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Yeah, yeah I know. Review day is over but I just can't help myself! Nitpicks first... - None, great work! Very inspirational, short but ...

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rotten Jelly Rubber

    Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Yeah, yeah I know. Review day is over but I just can't help myself! Nitpicks first... - Short sentences that could be extended, also ...

    Jul 28, 2014


You know what the big problem is in telling fantasy and reality apart? They're both ridiculous.
— The 12th Doctor