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Re: I hate dogs.
No idea why I'm reviewing this but I couldn't help myself. Nitpicks first... I doubt it has any need for grammar or punctuation but I'm going to tear this apart ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Hecate's Plan: prologue
OMFG, YUSSSS I'm going to review the hell out of this! *squeals* Okay okay, first off nitpicks. No serious spelling issues but one thing... Areas laughed It absolutely ticks my ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: The Field Slaves
Hey there! Scarlet here for a review, man it's been a while since I've bothered reviewing. Anyhow I can't guarantee the accuracy of my reviews but I'll do my best. ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: She's gone
Hey there! Scarlet here for a review, man it's been a while since I've bothered reviewing. Anyhow I can't guarantee the accuracy of my reviews but I'll do my best. ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Betrayal
Hey there, Scarlet here to review! Alright, nitpicks first! What is the cost?To retrieve what may never be gained, Shaken beyond belief of the wrongdoing that has succumb them. -Wrong ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: By The Way, Your Mascara Is Smeared
Hey there, Scarlet here to review! As far as I can see this poem has no grammatical or punctual issues that really stand out. This poem is rather depressing, but ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Our Truth
Hey there, Scarlet here to review! This was truly beautiful but before I list the pro's I have to go over the cons... - There is a big run on ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: DELETED
Hey there! Scarlet here to review. So just sit tight, relax and enjoy the show! Nitpicks first... She nodded turned back to stare out the window. The storm of lights ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: REDACTED
Hey there! Scarlet here to review. So just sit tight, relax and enjoy the show! Nitpicks first... She huffed in irritation and typed a reply to Janie's third text in ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: DELETED
Hey there! Scarlet here to review. So just sit tight, relax and enjoy the show! Nitpicks first... She was standing in a section devoted to folktales and held in her ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: REDACTED
Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Yeah, yeah I know. Review day is over but I just can't help myself! Perfect punctuation and grammar. This gave me a little prick ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: Love strinks~Part 1
Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Yeah, yeah I know. Review day is over but I just can't help myself! Beautiful! This just about brought me to the brink of ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: There is too much
Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Yeah, yeah I know. Review day is over but I just can't help myself! I see why you left It out, Aley is educating ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: Silverfish
Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Yeah, yeah I know. Review day is over but I just can't help myself! Nitpicks first... - None, great work! Very inspirational, short but ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: Rotten Jelly Rubber
Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Yeah, yeah I know. Review day is over but I just can't help myself! Nitpicks first... - Short sentences that could be extended, also ...
Jul 28, 2014
