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SavageRaptor109

SavageRaptor109

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin | Senior Project - 1

    Thank you! I'll be sure to fix those mistakes and, if I use your review, cover up your username!

    Jul 9
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: 4. The First Class (Conqueror Rising)

    Thanks for explaining that, Book! And, Snoink, I have not read the first two chapters, but I defiantly should instead of starting this story in the middle. These two chapters ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin | Chapter 2 Continued + Chapter 3

    Thank you! I'm currently reworking the whole book and I'll take all these into consideration as I do!

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin 2nd Chapter

    Oh, okay then. I was scared because I never remembered writing a "banana" joke in this chapter. Thank you!

    Jan 21
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin 2nd Chapter

    You're making me nervous. What "bananas" joke are you referring to?

    Jan 21
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: ​A Mental Push And One Cut

    Your welcome! Glad I could help you remember that :)

    May 14, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin -- Chapter 1 -- Version 2

    Thanks for that review. I'm currently in the process of rereading my chapters to edit them and add/take out things. I'll make sure to take these into account.

    May 8, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Suffocation

    You're welcome! :)

    May 7, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin Prologue

    Nope, sorry that's not it. Good guess though!

    May 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: 💬↔️🌳➕🌱

    This was really interesting. I showed this to my friend and we translated it in our silly goofy way of interpretating this. Thought I might share this masterpiece with you. ...

    Apr 28, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin Prologue

    Sorry, that's not it. Though the show looks interesting, so I'll watch it once I get my Netflix privileges back. Good guess though!

    Apr 28, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin Prologue

    Good guess on the inspiration. I have to ask though; what Netflix show do you think I got my inspiration from?

    Apr 28, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Gentle are the Hands

    I like this poem. It's short and sweet, and has a meaning that isn't all that deep, but also makes you wonder if there's another meaning to the poem. Keep ...

    Nov 20, 2024


The most difficult thing in the world is to know how to do a thing and to watch somebody else doing it wrong, without comment.
— T. H. White