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SavageRaptor109

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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: attack on my mind

    I love when things are short but impactful. I noticed this work in the green room and thought I'd give it a review. Not much to say about this. I ...

    Jul 15
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter Seven: The Waiting Game

    Ooo, this was an interesting read! Now for the review! First off, I like that this is written in a first-person style. I've tried, and failed, to write my stories ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: 4. The First Class (Conqueror Rising)

    Alright, time for another review, and to see how this story continues. First off, I think while Archondid might be my favorite character. I mean, the way he "waddles" as ...

    Feb 14
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Hands

    Well this was an heartfelt read. I don't have much to say, but I felt this in my heart. At first, I didn't know what this was about, but reading ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: 3. A Gift from Uclepidies (Conqueror Rising)

    First off, that cover is amazing! I love it. Now for the review and my thoughts... First off, this Archondid is really interesting. A shape shifting black swan with poisonous ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Science Fiction Re: Prologue: Mother's Medicine

    That poem at the beginning was wonderful! Chef's kiss. I was very entertained reading this. This is an interesting story. I couldn't find any errors, but I think I'll leave ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Ezra’s curse

    I love this. It was definitely worth scrolling for a bit to find it. As someone who is currently in high school and stressing with knowing I have to pick ...

    Jan 21
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 6} Chapter 5 (part 1)

    I jumped into the middle of this story but it seems interesting so far. I'll have to stick along for the ride, because this is interesting. It's really fun to ...

    Jan 9
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: My Dark Angel: part of chapter 1

    Dang. This was very interesting and a good start to a chapter. The starting paragraph was very good. The backstory was also really good. Also, the 'writer' having two half ...

    May 13, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: ​A Mental Push And One Cut

    This is a very deep poem and as someone who was in a place like this once, it feels very emotional. I love deep poems like this because I don't ...

    May 13, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Suffocation

    Ooo. This is an interesting one. Another short poem, but that's okay! Short and sweet can sometimes be good. And in this case, it was! A very deep poem. To ...

    May 6, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Mama, I’m in Love (With a Banjo Player)

    This was something you would only expect a poet in the wild west to come up with. I loved this poem. The repetition of "Oh mama" makes it sound like ...

    May 1, 2025
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Nevertheless, Heartless

    Oooo. So, we have some song lyrics on here. This site has everything, I swear. I think that this were very interesting song lyrics. At first, I thought it was ...

    Apr 30, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    Oh my gosh. This was amazing! 10 stars to you. And don't ever do that again, putting the disclaimer at the end. I felt my soul almost leave me body ...

    Apr 28, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Humor Re: Mundane Work (CHP 2) - The Price of Things

    I started reading this and my first two thoughts were "What did I just read?" and "Dang... This is pretty interesting..." I wasn't even done with the first part, and ...

    Apr 24, 2025


Pain is filtered in a poem so that it becomes finally, in the end, pleasure.
— Mark Strand