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Re: With Music On
Hi popsicles! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...
Oct 24, 2017 -
Re: Just Listen, Please
Hi Flumadiddle! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...
Oct 23, 2017 -
Re: Dear Orion
Hi ChocolateCello! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...
Oct 23, 2017 -
Re: May The Force Be With You
Hi popsicles! Welcome to YWS! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what ...
Oct 23, 2017 -
Re: Inside Out and Outside In
Hi Flumadiddle! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...
Oct 23, 2017 -
Re: When the truth comes out
Hi ashpandas! Saruka here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was positive about ...
Oct 19, 2017 -
Re: Parents
Hi wordwing! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...
Oct 17, 2017 -
Re: dear you
Hi Kara! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! This story really touched me, so I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first. like, the bitchiest bitch ...
Oct 4, 2017 -
Re: Buy Me A Pen
Hi there! Welcome to YWS, by the way!! I'm Saru, here for a hopefully quick review on your poem!! I'm going to try and start on the grammar and little ...
Sep 26, 2017 -
Re: There's a Fine Line Prologue (GORE WARNING)
Hi Kara! I've sort of fallen out of the loop of reviewing, so let me just make a few suggestions (it might not be that helpful, I'm sorry!) First off, ...
Sep 10, 2017 -
Re: Me, Myself and I
Heya Eibhlin01! Knight Saru of the Green Room here to review your poem (: Welcome to YWS and let's start the review! First off, I really loved this poem. It ...
May 17, 2017 -
Re: I was young and dumb
Hey Jurelixranoanad! Saru here to review your poem! :D Wow. This was a really deep poem. This... ahhhh! This part of the review is going to be really short because ...
May 10, 2017 -
Re: Look to the Son
Heya KeepWriting! Knight Saru here to review your poem :3 Okay, this was beautiful. Okay? The comparison not only to the sun to the Son by sounds but as guiding ...
May 9, 2017 -
Re: My first poem on this website! :)
Hey Rainy685! Saruka here to review your poem! Let's jump right in! I related to this poem very well, as you can probably tell from all my works. It makes ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Tik Tok Review Clock
Hey niteowl! Knight Saru here for a hopefully helpful review on your parodical lyrics! I honestly really loved this, and wasn't sure about reviewing this because I thought it was ...
Apr 30, 2017