Sarrasponda

Hey there!! I haven't reviewed in ages so I'm a little rusty, but I'll give it a shot. Your story idea looks really interesting, the whole back-to-back realms of light ...

Hey there Vivian! This is a pretty cool story idea. Nice idea with the prologue being a man telling a little boy and girl a story. However, you need to ...

Hello there! I like how your characters seem pretty interesting right off the bat, good solid characters with, well character. Esther is right though - Carter needs to be more ...

Hey there! This is a really good poem; Nick already mentioned the strong emotion, which is valuable in effective poetry. I like the flow of it; little punctuation which is ...

Hey there! I love your story idea! :D I've been in love with the idea of Jack Frost ever since watching at that kid's movie Rise of The Guardians. xD ...

Hey there! This is a really cool poem. In fact, I really like it :D You use acceptance to describe a relationship, and you make acceptance into categories, like fake ...

Heeeeeyyyy you! :D Ah, poetry. Still not my thing, but this is good. And symbiosis brings back such lovely memories of grade nine science class and the ecosystem .... Right, ...

Hey there! Super cool story idea; fantasy is always interesting. I really enjoyed reading this. There are a few things I'd like to comment on though: I agree with Laura ...

Hello! This is definitely poetry :P. Cool idea by the way, fantasy and reality are often separated into two categories that only join in fiction stories. But when you say ...

Hi there! This ... um ... well, is it an essay? Ok, so your writing piece, it's really good :D I like how you sort of describe love by what, ...

Hey there! As far as reviewing goes, Noelle has it pretty much covered. But I'll see what I can do ;) Most of the things I can find are nitpicky, ...

Hi there! I got interested by your description of the poem, and after reading it, have decided you've done an amazing job, so good for you :D I like how ...

Hello there! Hmm ... not sure what kind of writing this is, sort of cool though, but I'm not sure how to review it. So here it goes: Ok so ...

Wow! Okay so I read your other poem and loved it, which of course meant epic-read-everything-this-author-wrote-so-far time! This one is good too. Honestly, I love all your rhyming! You do ...

Hey this is really good! :D Honestly, I love rhymes (I'm not a poet, but I do appreciate that technique) and I think HT already mentioned the whole last line ...