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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Bitter Extant Love

    so this is pretty good, I like what you did here :) the beginning was a but scratchy, scratchy to me is a nother way to say rushed or not ...

    Aug 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: to the next girl who loves him

    ok this is pretty good! :) it is the best, and it is pretty corny but that is just fin :) it is good to have a love story be ...

    Aug 25, 2016
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Other Re: Romeo And Cinderella - 2P!ToronCSA

    so this is a pretty good story you have here i like it a lot and i think it is like pizza good and i love pizza so good work. ...

    Jul 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Pain- Part I

    ok so this is some good stuff here and I can tell that you have some true talent but to real here wen you said Their comments seem to be ...

    Jul 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Sleeping Prince: Chapter 1

    ok so you got a lot going on here it is a pretty good story I must say so good that I will follow you! I really like the story ...

    Jul 24, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Memento Mori: Chapter 1

    ok so this is a great story here and I must say that I am impressed there were a little bit of ruff edges here and there but nun the ...

    Jul 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Dear Elder Brother

    This was a vary nice letter story thing, I like how you started out great confidents in what you were writing I like that you mad it sound like it ...

    Jul 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Dresses and Politics Part 2: Chapter 5

    LOVE!!!! your work P.S it is me you friend and love the story but there is only one thing on a few parts I cant really tell who is talking ...

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Politics, General Re: What if

    I like what you've got a good story here i am a big fan you can tell that you have bin righting a bit, I like the ending but the ...

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Lesson in Walking Through a Door.

    HEY! it is your friend do you remember you followed me! ya well I like the story you have a great talent and the beginning was great and I thought ...

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Teen Fiction Re: When a Bird Sings Chapter 3, 4 & 5

    I really like your story and I really think that you've got something going on here the beginning I did not really understand but the end was phenomenal. I like ...

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire Book Three ~ Touch the Sky Chapter 3

    ok this story thing you got going on is full on EPIC!!! I love it so much like pizza love it you have a real talent and the pitcher of ...

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire Book Three ~ Touch the Sky Chapter 2

    this is really good I like what you got going on here P.S Smaug is a dragon to. And I followed you, and I think your following me but I ...

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: invalid

    so that's a bit different I did not under stand most of it but you no what no one is perfect no story is perfect ether but that can be ...

    Jul 21, 2016
  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Let Go of the Ones You Love

    ya that pretty much sums up a love story, like what you did there it was quit funny in the good way I must of giggled or smiled wen reading ...

    Jul 21, 2016


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