Sarah12

Thanks! Do you think it has a chance in the contest?

Thanks! Do you think it has a chance in the contest?

I made some changes to the stanzas, can you read it again?

I changed some of the rhyming lines that seemed a little off, like you said, and I think it sounds better now. Can you take another look at it? And ...

Thanks so much! I didn't even notice that till you said something! I actually don't normally write poetry. I'm more of a novelist. But this week.............. I didn't want to ...

Thanks, Lord Clickdun! *Bows and exits room* :)

Thanks for your review! It actually provided me some things to think about with the revised version. Thanks!

Neither have I! If you figure it out pleeeeeeeeeeease let me know

Okay.... This is really short for a poem. I'm not sure how you came up with this, but it actually makes me want to laugh because it don't understand what ...

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Hi! It's Sarah here to review. I have to say, this is a hauntingly beautiful piece. And it is nearly completely free of spelling and grammatical mistakes. Throughout the whole ...

This is really good! I must say, I love your style. One thing that I noticed, though, is the lack of defined stanzas. It sounds great how it is, though, ...

Awesome! Thank you so much. I actually do have another poem called Alone that I posted as well. I would appreciate it if you checked it out!

Oh, I guess I didn't notice that when I uploaded it. Thanks for all your advice, I'll be sure to make changes. This is the first poem I've done in ...

Okay, thanks.

But how do you get the box? Thanks.