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Thank you! I like to leave interpretations open to readers as to the meaning, but mostly I just wanted to present a special kind of imagery with colors. I guess ...

I like the way you edited this, Aley. The flow is certainly very much better, there's just a few more things to keep working on (which I agree with Persy ...

Thank you! This is very helpful to me, so thank you! :) And by the way, welcome to YWS!

Thank you so much for your review! I did the lack of punctuation on purpose, just to try it out, but maybe it didn't work so well. :P Thanks again!

Thank you! :) Haha I do write poetry often, just not very dramatic usually. :p Glad you liked it!

What can I say? Either you write incredibly beautifully when you are extremely angry, or you just write incredibly beautifully all the time. If I had time to write a ...

Hey Orel, Since you have the completed version of this poem up already, maybe you want to make this one private in your portfolio, to avoid confusion. :D If you ...

Umm...just wondering, why did you copy sentences from my review?

Definitely.

Aww, thanks! :)

Thanks! I did mean to say "sickly sweetly", but maybe not the best idea. XD It sounds like you interpreted it how I imagined it, that's probably good. Thanks for ...

Hello! This was really awesome. My review is above - my computer was being all weird with submitting it. But anyways. Good job! P.S. Sorry for the length. xD

Funny and light, despite the title. I like the tone, and the repetitive countdown of the first two lines of each stanza, gradually approaching the end of the world. However, ...

Yeah, you're right. I did put it there just to rhyme. I think I'll be rewriting the poem soon! :? Bluey

Thanks, Jasmine! I will work on what you told me, perhaps changing the title in the process. I didn't really like the last stanza either; it just sort of came ...