Published March 29, 2013
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Hey Orel,
If you just click "Edit portfolio" in the settings bar, you can get to this thread (make sure it's this one and not the real one) and check the box that says "Private" on the right side. That should make it so when people click on your portfolio, they don't see this thread anymore. You don't have to do that if you don't want to, it's just my humble suggestion. 
Since you have the completed version of this poem up already, maybe you want to make this one private in your portfolio, to avoid confusion.
~Sapi
Hello There......
Sorry to see that there is no poem here. I'm sure it would have been a good one with a title like that.
Hello Orel here I am for something for you.
First of you really need to write some more to your book and second I cant see anything here at all.
But I am sure that there was a mistake and you could not write anything here or you did everything but decided that you should not write because maybe you thought you might not get positive feed back well it always happens like that so just do it and get better and better.
Anyway don't fell to bad about posting your writing and just if you need any help let me know.
Keep writing and good luck.
Why is there no poem?