Sam

*disgusted* children's books? for us preteens? I think not! *lol* Those do look rather good, I must say. :D I'll look for them later.

*whew* I don't care. It's not like I actually would show these to anyone! *lol* I guess my age really shows....

I didn't post it at RK for obvious reasons. *lol*

This made me chuckle...I love the 'watch me make spit bubbles' thing! :D

I have to say I enjoyed it too. As with Brian, no criticism from me either. I really did love the last line...:D *sigh*

and YES! that was the lamest thing I've ever said in a critique!

I thought it was HILARIOUS...it's really cool! Very true to life...*lol* I enjoyed this. Keep it up! (K, I know that was lame...)

yes...this is a very nice and well written poem. :D It reminds me of me and my friends...*sigh* good job, I don't have any critique.

oooh...this sounds really good! please get to work on it right away, missy, or I'm going to get after you....*lol* :D

thanks guys! It's on my to do list...

that's OK...these seriously need work, I know that. :D

welcome! just somethign that I noticed!

Sure...that would be awesome! Can't wait!

Just a question...when I want to post more of a story, do I do a new post or do I just post the same post? I completely HATE language arts. ...

I have to say I really enjoyed this. It flowed really well, and you didn't rhyme...yay! I think you should have called it Phoenix...*lol*