Sam

uhm...I've never even heard of her. *runs to library*

I'll critique this later, after school. So far, so good!

ha ha. I've sparked a conversation as to how to make your parents think you're bleeding..interesting

Thanks. haha It's just something I noticed because, at first glance, you go 'what?!' you get it eventually, i just thought you needed just a little bit more explanation. It's ...

It was just adding on to concious thoughts one at a time. lol that's why it's so confuzing

See, i got a wow and a... HA HA!!!! Loved it, PsyLynx. It's very interesting to say the least. Gosh sam, the best you could do would be to say ...

thanks. :D

The same person is talking. :D That's why.

WHEE!!! sorry. ha ha. But what parts did you think were too descriptive?

I got it. Like i said... Very good. You got the point across, and it wasn't clunky or dumb like other poems of its kind...

I loved the last line. '...sometimes' ha ha. Cool No comment. Though i did post something. Like you said.

Hourglass Hourglass-No prior reading require Now

Wierd...but good. I thought it was really good...and too short to really do any critiquing on. Oh well. Will there be a continuation of this?

awwww.... i love the title. it's such a cool poem...sad, depressing even, yes, but still... WELCOME BACK!

kewl...good luck!