Sam

Incandescence...you're usually way tougher than I am but now I have to agree with you...a lot of people have written poems like this about 9/11, so you have to really ...

It was OK. *lol* we're just buttering you up so you'll feel good and write more...just a question, how do you write a sonnet? Once I know that I can ...

I thought it was kinda creepy...Alexis is obviously troubled (duh, Sam!) But you don't just say 'Alexis was sad because her dad is a drunkard and her mom ingnores her. ...

Again...this is really really good! So, like usual...instead of constructive crit, I'll tell you what I like. *you're true to your characters. They don't really change all that much throughout, ...

Yes, I think it's pretty good...I don't really have any constructive criticism, so all I can say is good job and work on it some more...see what you get! I ...

Ooh la was very good, and that puts into words what a lot of us feel, huh? :D Here's what I liked, since I don't have any crit: *Great analogies. ...

OK, I'll be nice *lol*. My only crit that I saw that at the end...well, duh, don't you usually use a knife to hurt someone (or a pat of butter?) ...

OK, this is a good poem and all, but you're pretty vague. What happens when he/she comes into the room? What happens when he/she speaks? I keep telling everybody's poem ...

I wasn't even here the other day so I don't have anything against you... :D I don't really think your poem needs tearing apart. Here's what I found and liked ...

Ya, I agree with both of them...:D Only crit would be 'see' in lines 2 and 4 should be 'sees'...Hey, I really liked it. Normally I don't care for rhyming ...

Hey, I couldn't find anything...it's really provacative, you know, about all the stuff about the guys with the blue eyes and there so different and stuff...I tried, really! I couldn't ...

That ROCKED!! I don't write descripitive stuff very well, so I have a lot of respect for people who can. :D Although that choirish feeling is very hard to achieve, ...

I read it...i thought it was pretty interesting. I'm trying to do a bit of research to separate fact from fiction, but it's still a great story in my opinion ...

I do think a little more depth and description would be in order here! I'm being hypocritical, though...I don't write about tense situations like this very well, ya know? :D ...

This was hilarious! It's a little entertaining bit, that's what everyone needs, right? :D It sort of reminds me of the people who take like soap and shampoo from hotels ...