Sam

HA! HA! HA! LOOKIT LOOKIT LOOKIT! Ok, I'll stop now. :D Love ya'll.

'London, near the Thames River in England,' Duh. Anyone with at least half an IQ point would know where the Thames is. 'She enjoyed coming home and dipping her feet ...

'Molded into an obidient hard rock Just like you intended' Uhm...woah. This is not exactly a way to show respect to your Daddy-O, if you get what I mean. :P ...

Part of my intent, yes, to be vague..but... What parts are especially, especially vague? I'll try to fix them. Brad's critique rocked. Yeah, it was harsh, but still...I'm just confused ...

'controlled words loll around empty static opens up an unchartered frontier of loneliness.' :shocked: Whatever happened to our on-the-brink-of-mediocrity, I-make-out-with-dead-people Brad? Who's this

I was 8 or 9...and in 3rd grade. Our teacher sat us down in a circle and hopelessly tried to explain to our frenzied, short-attention spans what had happened. Then ...

I don't know what's wrong with me...I didn't get very much out of it. Sorry to be a stinker, but it seemed too much like 'Oh, my mom died and ...

Wow. Can I say METAPHORICAL, people? And puzzling. Absolutely lovely, Mesh. I'm a sucker for anyone who uses the word 'score' in a number sense...Don't know why. "For a score ...

HAHAHAHA! Honestly, I find you people amusing. 'Fear shot through her, if they catch me now I’m done for.' Fear, fear fear. Funny word...and a good one too...but you use ...

Yep. Mediocrity achieved, at least for the last couple lines. Being of my generation, this "If I would watch Aladdin do you think he would take me somewhere far away ...

Okay, who is Helen and who is Rachel? I couldn't quite sort it out... I also couldn't quite see it in my head. It was just...OK...who is Cody? Who is ...

Truthfully, if you need to edit anything, I think it had best be the beginning. To me it was pretty much mediocrity presented in a mediocre way...normal, blah. The end, ...

Uhm... Excuse me for being such an idiot, but what did this have to do with serial killers? *shakes head* Yeah, like Crysi said, it's really deep, and who am ...

Yes, I read the rating, but still. For the first section, it seemed like you were playing that good ol' childhood game: HOW MANY TIMES CAN I USE THE SAME ...

OOOH! I finally get the title! *slaps forehead* Ahh, my interpretation: guy likes girl (before poem starts)>love hides all flaws, o'course>another guy comes on horseback, apparently very loudly and wi