SakuraFallsSweetly♥

This is great, to be honest I am surprised it has not gotten much more reviews! It's very good, and emotional. The imagery and emotion is pretty good, one of ...

Hey! Sorry it took me so long to review this, I had to leave yesterday when I was about to. LOL. There was just one part where you forgot J ...

That was really really good. I really felt when she was speaking to Jared about her feelings towards crying when he makes comments on it. I think he's a bit ...

Another great piece! I'm really loving this story, its very unique. I loved that you put a twist in it like that, it was totally funny and unexpected. You did ...

Omg! I am absolutely loving this! It's fabulous! I like Jessie, he seems realyl sweet. I also really like Merry. She seems like an overall nice person. The stor is ...

Wow! For a first piece, I must say that was incredible! I loved it! But, when you say "the end" do you really mean the end? Are you writing more? ...

:arrow: “No, I’ve got to stay in and look after the kids. Matt’s going out, again” You forgot your full stop. (aka period of the sentence). You did that quite ...

Very cute short story you have on your hands! I liked it, honestly. The only thing is, dialogue. It needs dialogue. I didn't know that untill I went onto YWS. ...

Hello! This piece was very. . .interesting. It was a little bit choppy though, and it could have a bit more detail. but other than that, it was really good! ...

Lol I liked it ! At the beginning I was expecting something totally different. I liked what you did with it though. It was funny and very unique. WHat was ...

Hello there! I really like this piece, like a lot. Hm I really do think that you should have finished it though. It was good, it was cute and it ...

Hey! I really like this story, the characters are cool and that Robin chick seems like a real bitch! Anyhow, I'm hooked on this ha. Its cute you have to ...

Very good. I like the story line thing in it....and the characters all seem pretty cool. Are you writing more? ? ? ? ? You totally should...unless of course you ...

AWESOME!~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it.! lots of imagary and emotion......which is g

That was soooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish it was like a book and I could just turn over the page and read what happens next. It totally has me hooked....but I ...