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This was an astonishing piece of work! You started out strong and ended just as strong. Bravo! The way you described Richard connected me with him on a personal level. ...

Well, that was certainly original, and interesting. The start of the story led me to believe one thing, and by the end I was surprised at the outcome. I liked ...

Amazing. I've never heard of this tale before. Slavery is a topic that has forever captivated me. The way you wrote it was amazing, and touching. I could hear his ...

This was certainly an interesting poem. I loved the way you integrated the old saying "curiosity kills the cat" into the message/theme left here. The last three stanzas, with a ...

Oh, my gosh. This was wonderfully well done. your rhythm was toned just right to match a little girl's innocent, trusting tone and at the same time paint a vivid ...

Ha, ha, ha! Oh dear, I remember those good old days of just starting the horrible roller coaster, knowing you don't want to get on, but you have too because ...

Well, I certainly applaud you for your audacity in submitting one of your works in a contest of any sort. I know it took a lot of nerve for me ...

Hey, welcome to the Writer's Society! I'm glad I'm not the only newbie. Anyway, you've done a very good job of writing this story. The forest swing reminds me of ...

OOh, this was a very vivid and beautiful poem here. It conveys a deep emotion, which really is any emotion. This poem could be for anger, for sadness, for despair ...

Very lyrical, and it gives a vivid, if not shadowed picture, which is hard enough in a story much less a poem! very awe inspiring and thought provoking. It has ...

Hmm, interesting plot line and thought processes. I believe you did very well on explaining how our detective came to that conclusion. A bit of advice, though, what is our ...

I liked this. The way you set it up really made it seem so real. Poem writing has always been a struggle for me too, and I know what it ...

That was beautiful. The vivid pictures of childhood that came to mind reminded me of my own summers full of playing and picking flowers, oblivious to all around. Odd how ...

Interesting. A story without being a story. I have to say i very much enjoyed it, and it did tweak a few brain cells in there. Your talent for rhyming ...

Well, I've certainly never read anything like this before. I applaud you on creativity and individuality. Never before have I imagined writing from the view point of a sword! Though, ...