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I really like this poem! It could be a little confusing, but I think that's because it requires thought, and that makes it good. G'job, keep writing.

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Sis, I had no idea you had this hidden talent. Jeez. It's really good, except for the whole rhyme scheme seems a little unsettles, and the stanzas aren't patterned, but ...

Remind me to tell you how good this is when you get back! :)

Goody.

Oh. My. Gosh. You capture seventh grade perfectly! But now that last line has me doubting how much better eighth grade will be. I like the way you split up ...

Man, I am lovin' this review thing. It's so helpful! I can't wait to start on the second draft. I'm glad you like it and your review was great!

Wow. It wasn't really that good. But I love that you love it! :D And yeah, I'm writing more. I'll upload chap. 2 soon. (And I've read Shiver. It is ...

Thanks for the critic! It really helped. I can't believe I used swear wrong... Well, how do you think it looks now?

Thanks! The critic will really help when I start the next draft. Glad you like it.

O_O Wow. That's terrifying and sick and twisted and realistic all at the same time. It's awesome! I feel like you just threw me into a serial killer's mind. I ...

No, it's not true, thank God. But I do have two nephews and a big brother, and my oldest nephew and me loved to climb, and it's true enough that ...

Thanks! I'll try and fix it now.