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SMulki

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Wild: The Rise of Misty Part 1

    HIII BACK AFTER A PRETTY long time... So like when I opened this website this was the first work i came across and i genuienly am a fan. The writing ...

    Apr 15
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The Elixir of Joy

    Hiii First of all I loved the way you expressed a man's emotions... The idea of the elixir was amazing But I feel you could have made it a bit ...

    Oct 1, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Under the Haze of the Sun

    Hiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!! SMulki here!!!!!!! First of all I wanted to say that this is a great poem.......... I loved the 2nd paragraph. I find your style of writing very creative and ...

    Aug 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: then i ate breakfast.

    HELLO!! First of all I just love this poem. But I personally feel u can make the title a bit better. Like since this poem is about insecurities I just ...

    Aug 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: let me brush the hair from your face

    Hii! First of all I loved the poem but I fell that if you make a few changes to it the poem will be much better. I feel if you ...

    Jun 21, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Humor Re: Doofus Detectives Ch 5 : Locked.

    Hiiiii I started to read your story So far I m loving it... I feel you can make this a bit more descriptive and add a few funny phares for ...

    Apr 10, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Nonsense Poetry_ the animal orchestra!

    Hiiii Love the way u have rhymed the words.I fell if u could summarised the poem a little bit it would make it better because while reading people tend to ...

    Apr 10, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: A Song of Hope

    Hiii! First of all I must say I liked reading this poem. Oh and the 3rd paragraph's last line, there is a typo for the word forgotten. Other than that ...

    Apr 10, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Botany

    I adore the way you have expressed your emotions through this poem, I m in love with it. I feel if you use the correct puntuaction marks for this it ...

    Apr 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: He says that he will never die

    Hi! I love the way you have written this poem. I think you can maintain a rhyme scheme to make your poem more attractive. Other than that I love the ...

    Apr 1, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: One runs the risk of crying a bit if one allows oneself to be tamed.

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    I just wanted to take a moment to tell you how truly inspiring your poetry is. Every word, every line you craft has a way of touching hearts and sparking ...

    Mar 31, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: inkblots on my former life

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    I just had to tell you—your poem totally swept me off my feet! It’s like a little treasure chest of emotions, and every line I read felt like opening up ...

    Mar 31, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Screaming into the Abyss

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    I wanted to take the time to truly express how much your poetry has resonated with me. As someone who deeply appreciates the art of words, I feel that your ...

    Mar 30, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: without any reason

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    THIS POEM IS JUST THE TYPE OF POEM I LIKE. IT SHOW HOW A FEW WORDS CAN EXPRESS DEEP EMOTIONS. FROM THE JOY TO THE SORROW EVERYTHING IS VISIBLE. I ...

    Mar 29, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Tonight isn’t the night.

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    Wanted to take the time to truly express how much your poetry has resonated with me. As someone who deeply appreciates the art of words, I feel that your work ...

    Mar 29, 2025


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