the relationship
started with care,
turned into love
(from my side)
but eventually the conversations stopped...
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Wow! I absolutely love these kind of poems. Short, sweet but has a very deep meaning underneath. According to me, it brought an imagery of a drizzle in a garden where plants sway with joy and eventually stop where in they end they just lie on the ground. The ending strikes a deep cord within many, which is my favourite part. I hope to read more of your work in the future.
thank you so much P Girl
love your response...
The simplicity and rhythmic scheme of this poem has a tranquil beauty to it, uncomplicated and direct. It brings to mind the imagery of a tranquil pond, the wind touches the surface and it ripples, until it stops. I hope to read more of your work in the future, this was very enjoyable.
will try to make sure that whatever i post is liked by the readers...thanks for appreciation
I AM IN LOVE. These are my favorite kinds of poems. Short and deep-cutting, and especially with an ominous ending, leaving the reader to guess what happened (even if we already know.)
What I appreciated was the use of parenthesis and periods. It’s unspoken but still so full of hurt, barely providing an ending. You loved and they just sat there.
I adore this and you’re just a great writer. Awesome job!!
thanks much S...