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Hello Emily! It's Sarah back again to review another one of your awesome stories. I just have one question to ask before I begin. Is this a short story? It ...

I thought this poem was beautiful. The words flowed nicely and your word choice was delicate and lovely, as was the poem. I'm guessing it's about a loved one (If ...

I hate to be rude or harsh towards anyone's piece of work, but I have to say that I agree with Niraco a ton. It's difficult to review your story ...

Hello Emily! Sarah here to review your first chapter. EEK! How exciting! As a starter, let me just start out with all of the positives. Your grammar, spelling and punctuation ...

I love this so much. Words can't even describe how beautiful and touching this is. I really love your writing and choice of words, and I'm sure you helped a ...

I hope you don't find my review in any way harsh or offensive, but there was a lot I found wrong with this passage. First of all, your spelling is ...

Hello, Gold Flame! For a starter, I think your detail is amazing! You have great writing skills, your grammar and spelling is right on. Everything is in place and as ...

Oh my... This is quite the story you have here. I absolutely love the heart hammering, nail biting feel you give to it. It adds on to the suspense and ...

Hello, Lucrezia! I just want to start off by saying that I was immediately hooked. Just reading the title, I got excited because ... well, let's be honest. All young ...

Wow! This story seems interesting and the story line had me gripped! The only thing I think would have made this chapter better were if you fixed your slight errors. ...

Let me just start off saying that I absolutely love stories about the after life! I don't know why, the concept of death and what comes after just fascinates me. ...

Hello, Louise! I'm Sarah (obviously). Let me just start off with saying that your writing is absolutely amazing! It's very suspenseful and interesting. Your character, Lucy seems to have this ...

Okay, first of all I just want to say that you did a good job with the organization and layout. It was all very neat and precise. Your words were ...

"Love is like a decoration, and I wish to hang it from the ceiling." O_O. You had me at this first sentence, and all of the rest. You have such ...

Well, let's see... I'm already interested with - what I think - the story plot is so far. You have a nice way of gripping the reader's attention, which is ...