Rydia

Hello, welcome to YWS! Your poem looked lonely so I thought I'd drop by and give it some attention :) Specifics 1. The title. I think you can do better ...

Hello fellow Toph! I wanted to review this yesterday but didn't quite get around to it so here I am today instead :D Specifics 1. A very strong opening until ...

Hello, here to review! :) Specifics 1. Okay so the opening is nice but a little bit over-used and that last sentence especially grates with me as I've heard the ...

Hello my dear! I told you I was going to review something of yours and with only forty minutes of review day left, I think this will be my last ...

I saw this and it got added to my review list. Who knows why, but it did so you get to have the pleasure of my company for half an ...

It wouldn't be fair if I didn't review a piece of yours during this cup, my darling rival. And since our dinner guest is late, I can begin now and ...

Pengi is two seven reviews ahead of me, but if I catch up to her and we draw, and if I review this for you, then you'll declare me the ...

Hello! I decided reviewing you would be fun so here I am :D Specifics 1. Leo (his English name) told me the legend of the heart-shaped lake a long time ...

Hello again! Here I am to review the second one, let's get right into this shall we? Specifics 1. Beautiful introduction. It sets the scene and has a lovely rumbling ...

Hi again! Okay so now I have some context, which is good as I'm sure that will help me understand what's going on. I'd first like to say that I ...

Hi Lylas! Its been so long since I said I wanted to read this that I'm sure you've forgotten, but maybe it will be a nice surprise and take your ...

Charlie! This is funny, I like you :D Specifics 1. Both of them were getting tired: they're been up late again. Just a silly typo - they're should be they'd. ...

Hi Ashley! I think the first thing I posted when I joined was a piece of work from a few years ago as well. It's a good way to sniff ...

Hello! We met briefly before and I decided I'd like to review a piece by you and your poem was sitting there just waiting to be picked on. 1. I'm ...

Why hello there, did you really think you could escape a review from me? Specifics 1. I absolutely love the layout of this, how it arches around and it looks ...