Rydia

Hi, here I am as promised! Specifics 1. You use 'just' a couple of times and it's not a great word for a non fiction piece because it's very colloquial ...

Time for the next review! Specifics 1. This chapter starts with a really big info dump and I'm not sure we need the recap. The events happened right at the ...

Sorry I got distracted but I'm back now! Specifics 1. Chip shoulder-barged the CMC door and stumbled into the still dazzingly dazzlingly bright room. The first thing he noticed was ...

Hi again! I have a long train journey today so I figure I can get two chapters in and pretend I totally did them yesterday and reached the goal of ...

Okay just one more since my team are still 1000 points behind and I want to give us every possible chance of winning xD Specifics 1. I twisted, dislodging the ...

I should probably go to bed but I'm in bed at least so that's close enough! Specifics 1. At the end of the last Thorn chapter the teacher was staring ...

Hi! I've not ready any of the previous parts so if I mention something you feel you've covered earlier, please feel free to ignore me! Specifics 1. “This sort of ...

Hi! So I am just tuning in and I found the afore-note really helpful so thanks for that. I'll start by picking out a few things as I read along ...

Yay, we're back to Corso! Specifics 1. I looked down the empty streets; I’d never felt so alone. I’d never seen the streets so empty, for that matter. I couldn’t ...

Another new character! This is perhaps a few too many for so early on now - I'd suggest revisiting a few of the others in between before introducing this one ...

Time for chapter 3! Specifics 1. I dashed towards the window, through the gap in the guards’ defenses. Really, they should have expected this. They left a gaping hole exactly ...

Hello again! The internet appears to be holding for now, though I switch to my next train in 20 minutes so let's get straight to it... Specifics 1. Chilly wind ...

Hi! I'm back to review the next chapter :) I'm on a train for the next two hours so you'll either get this really late because the internet gives out ...

Hi! I thought I'd drop by and do my first review as promised :) Specifics 1. The setting sun shot a blazing path through the barren plains, bathing it in ...

I'm probably looking at just two chapters today as I need to get a storybook post or two done before I head out for the day. And yes, sometimes my ...