Rydia

Hey there! Cool poem you have here, I think you've got some good lines but maybe you could add some more imagery and make it flow a little more smoothly. ...

Despite what many of her employees might say about her, Allegra really did not enjoy murder at all . She found it very unpleasant that in her line of work, ...

Review by tomorrow? Of course, hun. It just so happens that I have the time :) And well, you're next on my list

Hey there! A few specific comments first and then I'll try to summarise: Felix Van Doren was having a good day. He’d successfully tailed his mark up Downwards St, [Should ...

Hey hey! Myth oooh, interesting. I played one of those games when I was younger. It was called Myth lol. I remember that there was a boat and a book ...

Hey hun, I hope everything is well with you

Hey there! Okay so I'm going to look at your title first. Now. It caught my eye a little but in all honesty if it weren't for you having 0 ...

If it's any consolation, this isn't technically a villanelle so Nate would have been forced to disqualify you. The middle line of each stanza also has to rhyme with each ...

This is cute. That was my ending perception of it, some nice, tidy lines than make an okay poem. Until that last line I was actually quite intrigued, I thought ...

I love formatted poetry! I think you should work it so that the expected ending fits though, it would be a shame to not finish the pantoum. Here's a few ...

Hey there! This is a very sweet poem you have here, it's nicely written and it flows very smoothly. I think you've done a good job. I'd perhaps like to ...

Hey there! So I enjoyed reading this but I grew disapointed toward the end because I was expecting a revelation on why she does this or at least a switch ...

Ah a Haiku! You have three very pretty lines here but I think they're more suited to a longer poem, they're not crisp and deadly enough for Haiku. When you ...

Sorry about the delay hun! You've got a good piece here, not much to nit pick but there's a few suggestions I can make: The dancer stumbles out the back ...

Reading the poem against the painting is ncie but what happens when you take the painting away? A pairing between types of art is often great, I think the pre-raphaelites ...