Rydia

Hullo again :) So I like this, though not as much as the other as I felt it wasn't expanded enough. It's short and yet it rambles and there just ...

Why hello there! I think you've got an interesting plot here, some good descriptions and in general, a really nice story. You've done well in building the suspence and I ...

Ah, a dramatic monolgue. Now this takes me back to my high school. We spent a lot of time working on a few of these and I loved all the ...

Why hello again! So, I liked this. The title is catchy which is why I picked it out from your others and I wasn't disapointed by the poem that followed. ...

Alright, here's a few specific comments to start us off: Crap. That was my home. Even if it was a bunch of weird creeps. Still. That was my house. [This ...

I haven't read the previous reviews so if I repeat something that just means there's an agreed consensus that you should fix it ;) Alright then, nit-picks first: I glanced ...

I've not seen much of the cartoon, though I vaguely recall the characters so I must have watched an episode or too, but I'll try to review this as well ...

Haiii! I am here to review but before I do, I'm actually amused to admit that this is so close to being the opposite of a poem I wrote during ...

A very nice idea for a poem you have here and sweetly written, I'm sure your family will be very proud. I do have a few suggestions, however. I think ...

There's a very gentle, lilting tone to this which is nice and you make excellent use of half rhymes and full rhymes. However, I think your word choice could be ...

What a lovely idea! I think it will be really nice one day when you look back on this and are able to tick a few off. Maybe you should ...

This poem has a really great feel to it: I love the imagery you use, the tone is beautifully contemplative and it's very well put together. I have a couple ...

Hi there! Alright so you've got some nice images and word choices here but I think you need to work a little more on those nuances of poetry which build ...

I've only had a quick scan through the other reviews so please forvive me if I repeat anything. With that said, I think you've got some alright lyrics here. I'm ...

Well howdy there. A very interesting poem you have here with some wonderful lines and an absolutely excellent tone. I find your choice of line breaks to be a little ...