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Re: Bare Bones
Hello! Rurouni here to review! And welcome to YWS! I like this poem, more specifically the imagery. I can picture someone holding a skull. I applaud you on that! My ...
Jul 1, 2014 -
Re: Titleless (Cutting Poem) *Trigger Warning*
Hello! Rurouni from Rugido Sol here to review! Well... A very interesting poem... I have some nitpics however. Her tears are all that’s left of her the rest has all ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Pins and Twine.
Hello, Rurouni is here to review from Rugido Sol! I liked this! It had a nice feeling of, yeah I'm alone, but I know you're there. I don't have any ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Cold hearted.
Hello! Rurouni here to review from Rugido Sol! Alright, this is nice! I like it, and some people do have cold hearts... But anyways! I have some nitpicks! Your intro... ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Seven Sins In My Home
Rurouni here to review from Rugido Sol! Happy Review Day! Well, nice poem! I like it! It's well written, and a raw emotion poem? Either way, its good. I do ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Sipping Orange Juice
Hello! Rurouni here to review from Rugido Sol! This is.. Nice! Its a bit... Not random, but it goes everywhere. I do like how its a bit all over the ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Rainstorms
Hey! This one wandered by! Here to review is Rurouni! Well, even though you might think it sucks, I think its wonderful! Acrostic poems aren't always the easiest, or have ...
Jun 11, 2014 -
Re: Shadow Friends
Hi! This one wandered over and decided to review! Well... It might be an easier read if it were broken down into stanzas, but that's my opinion. I have one ...
Jun 11, 2014 -
Re: Pruning Weeds on Cedar Mulch; Life is Unfair
Hi... Shad here! You wanted me to review this so... I can't nitpick on anything, if that's what you wanted. The stanzas are nice and aren't choppy. And I get ...
Jun 9, 2014 -
Re: A Songbird's Signal
Hey! Rurouni here to review! May Poetry Exchange 2014! Let me tell you, you had me counting your lines and everything to ensure it was a villanelle. I'm not very ...
May 30, 2014 -
Re: They Call Me a Writer
Hello! Rurouni here to review! From the May Poetry Exchange 2014! I must agree with you. A lovely poem. I enjoyed how you kept up the, "They call me a ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: you will not win tonight
Hey! Rurouni here from the May 2014 Poetry Exchange! May I just say this is.... Interesting? Very interesting, but also very nice and... yeah. Interesting! This is very unique. I'm ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: Red Roses/Black Roses
Okay. Happy Review Day! Rurouni here to review! Alright. This was good. I liked it. The only nitpicks I have are the links, which just link to this page. If ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: What is Love?
Hello! Rurouni here to review! Interesting poem. I like it. But I have some nitpicks. Is it the infliction on our lives as we know it only to be ripped ...
May 24, 2014 -
Re: Dining With Life
Hello! Rurouni here to review! I liked this poem, it has a nice tone to it. Your poetry lines are long, but I like it. It gives it a different ...
May 24, 2014
