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Rurouni

Wandering here and there, this one shall wander until she ends.

  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: Bare Bones

    Hello! Rurouni here to review! And welcome to YWS! I like this poem, more specifically the imagery. I can picture someone holding a skull. I applaud you on that! My ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Titleless (Cutting Poem) *Trigger Warning*

    Hello! Rurouni from Rugido Sol here to review! Well... A very interesting poem... I have some nitpics however. Her tears are all that’s left of her the rest has all ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Pins and Twine.

    Hello, Rurouni is here to review from Rugido Sol! I liked this! It had a nice feeling of, yeah I'm alone, but I know you're there. I don't have any ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Cold hearted.

    Hello! Rurouni here to review from Rugido Sol! Alright, this is nice! I like it, and some people do have cold hearts... But anyways! I have some nitpicks! Your intro... ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Seven Sins In My Home

    Rurouni here to review from Rugido Sol! Happy Review Day! Well, nice poem! I like it! It's well written, and a raw emotion poem? Either way, its good. I do ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Sipping Orange Juice

    Hello! Rurouni here to review from Rugido Sol! This is.. Nice! Its a bit... Not random, but it goes everywhere. I do like how its a bit all over the ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Rainstorms

    Hey! This one wandered by! Here to review is Rurouni! Well, even though you might think it sucks, I think its wonderful! Acrostic poems aren't always the easiest, or have ...

    Jun 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Shadow Friends

    Hi! This one wandered over and decided to review! Well... It might be an easier read if it were broken down into stanzas, but that's my opinion. I have one ...

    Jun 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Pruning Weeds on Cedar Mulch; Life is Unfair

    Hi... Shad here! You wanted me to review this so... I can't nitpick on anything, if that's what you wanted. The stanzas are nice and aren't choppy. And I get ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Songbird's Signal

    Hey! Rurouni here to review! May Poetry Exchange 2014! Let me tell you, you had me counting your lines and everything to ensure it was a villanelle. I'm not very ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: They Call Me a Writer

    Hello! Rurouni here to review! From the May Poetry Exchange 2014! I must agree with you. A lovely poem. I enjoyed how you kept up the, "They call me a ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: you will not win tonight

    Hey! Rurouni here from the May 2014 Poetry Exchange! May I just say this is.... Interesting? Very interesting, but also very nice and... yeah. Interesting! This is very unique. I'm ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Red Roses/Black Roses

    Okay. Happy Review Day! Rurouni here to review! Alright. This was good. I liked it. The only nitpicks I have are the links, which just link to this page. If ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: What is Love?

    Hello! Rurouni here to review! Interesting poem. I like it. But I have some nitpicks. Is it the infliction on our lives as we know it only to be ripped ...

    May 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Dining With Life

    Hello! Rurouni here to review! I liked this poem, it has a nice tone to it. Your poetry lines are long, but I like it. It gives it a different ...

    May 24, 2014


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