Rurouni

Oh, this is deep. I remember that workshop Gee put up (Rum, those silly pirates..) So, I see this must be deep. I honesty can not find something wrong with ...

Ohh, I loved this. I feel the idea of the poem, and the power it has. I like the end; They know your work, maybe even appreciate it, but only ...

Ohh I loved this!! I saw some places where words hadno space, such as...... I don't knowwhy they spared me then, Iask myself that kills me becauseI fought so hard ...

This is cool! Now, taking from a person who listens to Heavy Metal and rock in general, I think this is cool! I can imagine the beat in my head ...

You need to re-read this, and PAY attention to what you are writing. You talk about Winter being there suddenly, Then Luke is with Mel, when at first it was ...

Ohhh! I am a personal fan of wolves. I have to say, this is really good, and I like it! I like how you say what happened when he rejected ...

Hey, Yet again, you have done this amazing thing with words, Ayden. I can feel the struggles once again, I feel the aches and pains. This is just a really ...

Wow. This is really amazing! I love this, is gives the feeling of mystery and suspense, it makes the reader, want to clutch the box, and feel the carving, and ...

WOw. This was good. It's sad yes, but, it shows we can move on after someone we love passes on. My favorite lines: I watched the final flight of your ...

This, was interesting. For starters, a little girl would visit the homeless and poor? I am awfully confused on that and, dont is don't And, "The are mean..." "They are ...

Hello, Hot Sauce! I really love this! It sounds like the beginning of a long story or something of the sorts. It's really cool, and I love the repeating of ...

This is interesting. I like the second verse, its really cool. I would like it if you added more to it, I feel it needs just a tad more, ya ...

This is cool. I liked it. Aley, this is really cool. Anyways, wry, is that worry? weary? Some people may not get it. It's sad in a way, and I ...

This is cool. I like it, you need a comma between take and take. It's sad and interesting. I like it though. I'll make sure to check out some more ...

Okay, I must say this is brilliant, I can totally picture the dragon in my head. I really like how you compared it to a human, and a dog and ...