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Hello, AliceAfternoon. Like always this was a well written chapter. I'm so glad to see Lord Briar is back. I was beginning to worry about his well being myself. On ...

Hello, goldypopo. I really liked this. It was so cute. The rhyming scheme wasn't boring and it rolled off my tongue, which is always a plus. However, I did find ...

I LOVE THIS! Thank you so much for writing this. I'm still "keeping my rose hidden" and this was very encouraging. I don't think many people understand what happens when ...

Hello, Questio. I'd like to say I enjoyed this but there wasn't much for me to enjoy. Poems are supposed to put normal or simple thoughts into more deep emotions. ...

Side note: Aww, what a sad turn of events. My friend is on the other side of the US so I know how this feels. We haven't seen each other ...

Greetings, Abhipsa. This was very deep considering you were only talking about a diary. Honestly I didn't know what to expect when I clicked on the link, but I was ...

Felistia, you're just too good at poetry for your own good. The imagery was amazing I felt like I was there even through you only wrote 10 stanzas. I cant ...

Hello, felistia! Wow, just wow! You have such a talent. Can you share it with me? Hehe, it was just too perfect. IT RHYMED! (which if you haven't guessed already ...

Hello, AliceAfternoon. Here to be the first one to review your new chapter. Slow down, girl! I can't keep up with you. Haha. This was well written and it was ...

Wow, Arzoo. This was very nice. I loved reading this it was like I was there myself. I began to feel all the things you felt. I really don't have ...

Hello, yizhongt. I feel like InfiniteRectangles pretty much covered all the grammar mistakes in this work so I won't take the time to point them out to you again. The ...

Hello again, AliceAfternoon. I must say this story is progressing rather well. I love how your formatting makes for an easy read. Just like the other chapters, I loved it ...

Hello, AliceAfternoon. I told you to expect a review from me and well, here I am. This chapter was great, but it felt like something was missing. Not because of ...

Oh my! This was just splendid! I can't believe how well written this is. You showed me so such in just ten stanzas. I really think you are gifted in ...

Hello, Soulfulwriter. I really liked this. I never really understood how hard it was to be in a society of white people as a darker skinned person. The things they ...