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  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Edge of The Seat

    Hello. \/\/onder here. I like this poem and I don't think I have much to say as far as correcting goes so, I'll make this quick. First off I commend ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Burning Bridges

    Hello Falc!! \/\/onder is here! I thought your piece was very interesting! I didn't really want to read it at first because I am feeling lazy but I kept reading ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Loveless - The Truth

    Hello. Wonder again. :D I thought this part of your story to be more interesting then the first part. It seems as you write more it gets better. You described ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Loveless - The Massacre

    Hello again. I enjoyed this and thought the very idea of wolf-people was awesome. I will get to my favorite part at the end of this review but first let's ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: She is Death Pt. 1 - The Therapist

    Hello. I enjoyed this very much because, it isn't an idea I have heard before. It is unique and surprising in its own way. The beginning wasn't very clear but ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Stolen Bride | Unedited

    Hello ArtStyx, Wonder here. I loved this short story. This wasn't predictable at all and I thought it was amazing. I loved it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Anyway ...

    Jun 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: Every now and then I sit in silence.

    Hello Strange, Wonder here. I read your poem within moments and thought this was pretty cool. The idea was fun and it has potential. Let me help you with some ...

    Jun 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Wanted

    Hello Sunnyanddinostomp, Wonder here. I really thought this poem was amazing and cool. The ending was very great and strong. I feel that the title was very well suited for ...

    Jun 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: My Angel

    Hello Tigerlilly37, Wonder here. I thought this poem was very elegant and lovely. You really made the reader (me) feel like you really loved your "dear angel". :D I think ...

    Jun 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: ----

    Hello PerksOfBeingAReader. Wonderwoman here. I didn't think that this was silly and I certainly wouldn't make fun of you for missing your friends. I loved the description and thoughts of ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Other » Literature, Realistic Re: Never Ending

    Hello Urba. Wonderwoman here. I thought this was a very cool description and I loved the question you asked at the end. And there is nothing for me to correct ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Ebony Sky

    Hello Chaser. My name's Wonderwoman. I really loved your sonnet. They are very hard to accomplish and I think you did a fabulous job. First you start off with saying ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: You Don't Read Deep Enough Into My Poetry

    Hello Jadefox, Wonderwoman here. I wonder what this poems purpose is. I didn't think it was funny and I cant say I liked. I don't have criticism for this but ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: The Rivers Clinic

    Hello Fizz. I can't begin to feel how hard it must have been. I believe you have a strong will and determination. If anyone can make something like this seem ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: Electric

    Hello Fizz. I read your story from beginning to end and I would have to say that this was so sad. I really liked it though. It makes me want ...

    Jun 2, 2015


May you never steal, lie, or cheat. But if you must steal, then steal away my sorrows. And if you must lie, then lie with me all the nights of your life. And if you must cheat, then please, cheat death.
— An Unknown Bride, Leap Year