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Re: Edge of The Seat
Hello. \/\/onder here. I like this poem and I don't think I have much to say as far as correcting goes so, I'll make this quick. First off I commend ...
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Re: Burning Bridges
Hello Falc!! \/\/onder is here! I thought your piece was very interesting! I didn't really want to read it at first because I am feeling lazy but I kept reading ...
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Re: Loveless - The Truth
Hello. Wonder again. :D I thought this part of your story to be more interesting then the first part. It seems as you write more it gets better. You described ...
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Re: Loveless - The Massacre
Hello again. I enjoyed this and thought the very idea of wolf-people was awesome. I will get to my favorite part at the end of this review but first let's ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 1 - The Therapist
Hello. I enjoyed this very much because, it isn't an idea I have heard before. It is unique and surprising in its own way. The beginning wasn't very clear but ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: The Stolen Bride | Unedited
Hello ArtStyx, Wonder here. I loved this short story. This wasn't predictable at all and I thought it was amazing. I loved it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Anyway ...
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: Every now and then I sit in silence.
Hello Strange, Wonder here. I read your poem within moments and thought this was pretty cool. The idea was fun and it has potential. Let me help you with some ...
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: Wanted
Hello Sunnyanddinostomp, Wonder here. I really thought this poem was amazing and cool. The ending was very great and strong. I feel that the title was very well suited for ...
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: My Angel
Hello Tigerlilly37, Wonder here. I thought this poem was very elegant and lovely. You really made the reader (me) feel like you really loved your "dear angel". :D I think ...
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: ----
Hello PerksOfBeingAReader. Wonderwoman here. I didn't think that this was silly and I certainly wouldn't make fun of you for missing your friends. I loved the description and thoughts of ...
Jun 2, 2015 -
Re: Never Ending
Hello Urba. Wonderwoman here. I thought this was a very cool description and I loved the question you asked at the end. And there is nothing for me to correct ...
Jun 2, 2015 -
Re: Ebony Sky
Hello Chaser. My name's Wonderwoman. I really loved your sonnet. They are very hard to accomplish and I think you did a fabulous job. First you start off with saying ...
Jun 2, 2015 -
Re: You Don't Read Deep Enough Into My Poetry
Hello Jadefox, Wonderwoman here. I wonder what this poems purpose is. I didn't think it was funny and I cant say I liked. I don't have criticism for this but ...
Jun 2, 2015 -
Re: The Rivers Clinic
Hello Fizz. I can't begin to feel how hard it must have been. I believe you have a strong will and determination. If anyone can make something like this seem ...
Jun 2, 2015 -
Re: Electric
Hello Fizz. I read your story from beginning to end and I would have to say that this was so sad. I really liked it though. It makes me want ...
Jun 2, 2015
