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  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Wander

    Hello, EKK15! I really liked this the best out of all the poems you asked me to review. It's a lot more professional and it seems more time was put ...

    Jul 19, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Goodbye

    Hello, EKK15! Even though a review for this was requested of me the only things that I would change about it is "damn" before "roads." I don't think it's necessary ...

    Jul 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: As Things Became Real

    Hello, EKK15! You requested a review from me in my forum, but I didn't get to it since I was on vacation without wifi so let me first apologize to ...

    Jul 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: The Rain

    Hello, Ishan212! I really liked all the rhyming in this poem, and I don't understand why you decided to stop here, The Sun is hiding Behind the clouds Revealing his ...

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yellow, Unforgettable

    Hello, midnightdreary! Seeing as you're fairly new, welcome to the Young Writer's Society! I really loved this, and I can relate to it myself since I just finished my sophomore ...

    Jun 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Noevery - Prologue

    Hello, Sassafras! What an interesting way to get me hooked into wanting to find out what's going on. There is a very odd side to this and that is that ...

    Jun 30, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Almost Drownded

    Hello, rosette! Here for the last review you requested of me! I really loved the relationship between the girl and her daddy. She's a stubborn little booger and her daddy ...

    Jun 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, Humor Re: For the Love of Mayo

    Hello, rosette! Here for the review you requested from me! Okay first off I can't even review this because there's nothing wrong with it. In fact I loved every second ...

    Jun 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: bleu / azul / blu

    Hello, honeymoon! I don't think I've ever seen anyone write free-verse like this in the way that the words fade. The way that it does that is kind of pleasing, ...

    Jun 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: What A Day

    Hello, rosette! Here for the review you requested of me! No. No crying. Please stop. You probably meant for this to be in italics since I believe this is what ...

    Jun 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: The melancholy of the triumph of the fall...

    Hello, itsfranksnappa! Welcome to the Young Writer's Society since I see you're new here, and if you have any questions after my review then feel free to ask! So the ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fairy Tail: ReBirth, Act 1, Chapter 1

    Hello, DragonNoir! I have been a fan of Fairy Tail for a long time now. However, I haven't found the rest of the about 100 some episodes on any free ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Tomorrow

    Hello, Sumerj12 and welcome to the Young Writer's Society! If you have any questions at the end of my review feel free to ask! something screams my name but nothing ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Alien Wife

    Hello, ShakespeareWallah! Here as I said I would be! ^^ I'm going to comment on grammar or writing choices first then talk about overall-thoughts at the end. :3 But that ...

    Jun 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1 - Princess Irene - Trigger

    Hello, Skywind555! And welcome to the Young Writers Society! If you have any questions about my review at the end feel free to ask. ^^ "Leila~" I throw my arms ...

    Jun 27, 2017


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