RoyalHighness

Hey Glasses! RoyalHighness has arrived to review! And I'm sorry I took so long! Alright, so this was good. You're keeping up the elegant diction to match the time period ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Alright, another good piece! Let's begin. Nitpick #1 Its blank ready to be filled with hours of checking out, dotted with those unfortunate moments when ...

Hey friend! RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, so this was good. I'll start with a few nitpicks. Nitpick #1 Two cookies, a slice of cake and I’m opening up ...

Wow. Just. Wow. RoyalHighness has arrived to give a short and very complimentary review. So um excuse me for a second while I put my heart back into my chest. ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Alright, so this is pretty good. Let's start with the nitpicks, shall we? Nitpick #1 I know he was outside "Know," should be, "knew." No ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, Stori, I'm gonna tell it to you straight: I suck at transitions myself. I wrote a piece called "Balloons," whose time transitions were so ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Well, this is a really spectacular poem you've got here! The flow reminds me of a horse's lope, which fits in nicely with the story. ...

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Your good friend RoyalHighness has arrived to review your remarkable piece! So this is interesting. I think you'd like reading James Patterson's Maximum Ride series– it's a lot like this. ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to write her 100th review! (You should know I read through several others' works before selecting yours to be my 100th review; congratulations!) Literally the only thing ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, I'm usually not one for crass humor, but this had me grinning from start to finish. You are really good at making the dialogue ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! First of all, welcome to YWS and congrats on making the literary spotlight on your first full day! Wow! Great usage of enjambment other than ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, I loved this. I'm just gonna gush for a bit. First off, I'm a sucker for enjambment, especially enjambment well done, the way yours ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, so this was good! I like the usage of periods at the end of the sentences; they gave a feeling of finality to the ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Nitpicks "Nearby," should be one word. "Him and his girlfriend," should be "he and his girlfriend." You changed your tense. "Have," should be "had," if ...