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Re: Unleashed:Awakened first part of a book that is still in progress.
RoyalHighness is FINALLY here to review! Wow, so you went through my entire book before I could even get one review on one chapter of yours, so needless to say ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: There is too much
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Ugh, I'm late to review day (again, boo) so you'll have to forgive me. I like the lack of punctuation! I think it means there's ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: the Osorezu and the Hana (10-2)
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! This was a really interesting piece; even though I hadn't read the rest of the story, I could totally grasp what was going on, the ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Where I'm From
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Well, nice poem you've got here m'dear! Let's begin, shall we? No big nitpicks so we can just go straight into Content. Content Very nice ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: Of Starbucks, Blushing Cashiers, and Batman Fistfights
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Awh, cute! Let's jump right in. Nitpicks People - or should say penguins; Did you mean: People - or, I should say, penguins; Wrong time ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: Trying Chapter 3.1
RoyalHighness has arrived for an entirely inexcusably late review! Okay, true story, I actually read this a few days ago and started a review and FORGOT TO SAVE IT so ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: My name is Kelly-Marie and I'm a murderer
RoyalHighness has finally arrived to review! Alright, this made me catch my breath a bit; I definitely didn't see the twist with the mom being the victim of the car ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: heavy metal
RoyalHighness has arrived to review your very first post! Welcome, welcome, welcome! Anyone who knows me knows I ADORE new people so if you ever need anything at all- points, ...
Jul 20, 2014 -
Re: Center Stage, Back Light
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Hey, JC! I super duper love this quite a lot, but before I can tell you why I have to, like, actually give you a ...
Jul 20, 2014 -
Re: (for once i'm at a loss for a title, please help)
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Enjambment combined with lack of capitalization makes for a very subtle yet profound impact on readers. I have no criticisms because there is none to ...
Jul 19, 2014 -
Re: Still Waiting on You
Your babe, RoyalHighness has arrived to review! So I know you've been going through a hard time with this break-up and I just wanted to let you know that I'm ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: Dull Scissors
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Rhia, I don't know if you know this, but I've been a fan of your poetry for quite a while and I'm seriously just honored ...
Jul 15, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 1: Mercy
RoyalHighness has arrived to give a horridly late review! Okay, so first major nitpick of my review, and one of Royal's Writing Rules (for future reference): any and all punctuation ...
Jul 14, 2014 -
Re: Minute
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! First off, welcome to YWS! Whoa, great poem! I love the rhyme scheme, and especially that last rhyme... I would never have thought to rhyme ...
Jul 12, 2014 -
Re: Sparrows
RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Alright, lovely thingy you've got here. I don't see any mechanical mistakes so I'll just skip to the Content review! Content So this was really ...
Jul 12, 2014