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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Benches

    Sorry, I meant to send that as a review. Take two! One of my favorite movies is called the Dead Poets Society, starring Robin Williams as an inspirational English teacher ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Benches

    One of my favorite movies is called the Dead Poets Society, starring Robin Williams as an inspirational English teacher who was once a rabble-rouser at a very prestigious boys' boarding ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: To Make A Violinist Sing (Part 1)

    Wow, I really like this! I've been to New York four or five times, so I can relate to the first bit. The kissing a stranger thing is a little ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Elementary (Chapter 1)

    Okay, I forgot to submit this as a review so let's try that again. Okay, I love this idea. I'm a huge fan of stories about people with powers and ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Elementary (Chapter 1)

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    Okay, I love this idea. I'm a huge fan of stories about people with powers and a school for those people and the hero being turned out for being weird. ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: "Happy Birthday, Fred."

    DO YOU MEAN TO TELL ME THAT YOU CAN JUST SIT DOWN AND WRITE LIKE THAT AND THEN CALL IT POINTLESS!?!? Okay, phew, let's start from the beginning and go ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Blocked

    I related to this poem from the get-go (gecko?). I've been feeling blocked for what seems like dumbledore's lifetime. Great usage of the ellipsis to build up to the stanzas. ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Paired

    I love this poem! I love the imagery of ink stains as scars, and I like how you left room for imagination in how the marks got there. Great job, ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the absence of sound

    The end of this poem hit me like a really well-placed punch in the atrium. I have always been fascinated with phrases relating to the sound of silence, and here ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: A Well of Memories - Part 2

    Again with those bolded words. They're distracting. Consider altering your tactic. I've never read the story this is based off of, but if that story has bolded words too, I ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: A Well of Memories - Part 1

    Okay, this is interesting. Way to hook the reader with the first sentence. I've always struggled with openings so I applaud you for that. But I don't feel like I ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When you blink.

    This was very unsettling. I hope that was your intention. I always prefer when a poem rhymes, but since this is the 21st freaking century, I applaud you for taking ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: An open invitation to my dad.

    First off, this was fantastic all around. I love the picture you painted around the middle, and I loved following you through the different stages of your life. The presentation ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Smoke Filled Forest Eyes

    Hey, I'm going to review your beautiful work here! First off, my first impression was "overdone." The beginning could've been a little more attention-grabbing, and less artificial. I feel like ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: Whose Pages Burn With These Attempts to Scrawl?

    You lost me around the middle, but I am a huge fan of metaphor. I love the repetition of the line, "Men think to run before they know to crawl," ...

    Jul 28, 2013


Men occasionally stumble over the truth, but most of them pick themselves up and hurry off as if nothing had happened.
— Winston Churchill