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Re: Benches
Sorry, I meant to send that as a review. Take two! One of my favorite movies is called the Dead Poets Society, starring Robin Williams as an inspirational English teacher ...
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Re: Benches
One of my favorite movies is called the Dead Poets Society, starring Robin Williams as an inspirational English teacher who was once a rabble-rouser at a very prestigious boys' boarding ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: To Make A Violinist Sing (Part 1)
Wow, I really like this! I've been to New York four or five times, so I can relate to the first bit. The kissing a stranger thing is a little ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: Elementary (Chapter 1)
Okay, I forgot to submit this as a review so let's try that again. Okay, I love this idea. I'm a huge fan of stories about people with powers and ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: Elementary (Chapter 1)
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Apr 2, 2014
Okay, I love this idea. I'm a huge fan of stories about people with powers and a school for those people and the hero being turned out for being weird. ... -
Re: "Happy Birthday, Fred."
DO YOU MEAN TO TELL ME THAT YOU CAN JUST SIT DOWN AND WRITE LIKE THAT AND THEN CALL IT POINTLESS!?!? Okay, phew, let's start from the beginning and go ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: Blocked
I related to this poem from the get-go (gecko?). I've been feeling blocked for what seems like dumbledore's lifetime. Great usage of the ellipsis to build up to the stanzas. ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: Paired
I love this poem! I love the imagery of ink stains as scars, and I like how you left room for imagination in how the marks got there. Great job, ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: the absence of sound
The end of this poem hit me like a really well-placed punch in the atrium. I have always been fascinated with phrases relating to the sound of silence, and here ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: A Well of Memories - Part 2
Again with those bolded words. They're distracting. Consider altering your tactic. I've never read the story this is based off of, but if that story has bolded words too, I ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: A Well of Memories - Part 1
Okay, this is interesting. Way to hook the reader with the first sentence. I've always struggled with openings so I applaud you for that. But I don't feel like I ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: When you blink.
This was very unsettling. I hope that was your intention. I always prefer when a poem rhymes, but since this is the 21st freaking century, I applaud you for taking ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: An open invitation to my dad.
First off, this was fantastic all around. I love the picture you painted around the middle, and I loved following you through the different stages of your life. The presentation ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: Smoke Filled Forest Eyes
Hey, I'm going to review your beautiful work here! First off, my first impression was "overdone." The beginning could've been a little more attention-grabbing, and less artificial. I feel like ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Whose Pages Burn With These Attempts to Scrawl?
You lost me around the middle, but I am a huge fan of metaphor. I love the repetition of the line, "Men think to run before they know to crawl," ...
Jul 28, 2013
