Ross

They had nothing to say to each other. Silence surrounded the room. The beginning is weak, the following sentence confusing. Try for a better hook. They both felt somehow confused. ...

Tonight INTRO Shut out, locked in You’re looking up But they push you down Helpless, powerless You try and try But you lose control VERSE As their choke hold fails ...

Testing and luring my weakness, the memories still torment me. The tedious repetition of images flashing across my mind blinding me, tainting my vision of life. You have some lovely ...

She was exhausted, her eye lids heavy with sleep. The sleepy/hurt feeling spread to her head as she rub s her temples a useless attempt to subside the pain. Girl ...

I must say you've got a very unique style of poetry. The way you use dashes is unexpected, but a very nice touch. It could become your trademark if you ...

Verse 1 Butterfly , Ill hold you tight Butterfly , please don't cry Cause you ' r e beautiful in my eyes So Chorus : Butterfly don't let your wings ...

Go poop your pants somewhere else, Gal. You're stinking up my thread. *dies laughing* Okay. So, real critique. I know I'm gonna sound like a broken record, but the ending ...

I stepped outside into the cool morning air. The summer sun peeked over the top of the house across the street; light spreading like liquid throughout the pink cotton candy ...

I hate Twilight. And I love you. Okay, moving on to the official review! Ahem... You do wonderfully here, overall. But your descriptions on the characters are bordering on info-dump. ...

I have to admit, you're a very talented writer. You do well with characters--the background of Bobby and the relationship between Leda and Bobby--and the conflict is obvious, yet subtle. ...

I'm gonna go out on a branch here and say Harper Lee's "To Kill a Mockingbird". Yes, I am fully aware the movie is a classic. But I watched the ...

I'm a big fan of the movies. I've adored Daniel Craig the most, though. He just takes this smooth, suave, womanizing spy and turns him inside out. Major kudos to ...

Let me warn you beforehand that I am not a strong poet. Anyways, let's get started! FIRST GLANCE I can really feel the pain, because your phrasing and your word ...

MUSIC This seems like an electronica piece, in the style of Imogen Heap. Lots of synths, a beautiful drum pulsing its way through. I can easily imagine electronica fitting this ...

My topic has really made me think twice. When I watch Ghost Whisperer I am amazed of seeing ghosts, it would be cool but then again, it would be creepy ...