Published September 15, 2010
I’m sick of being pushed around
And they keep knocking me down
Well not anymore, I'm taking a stand
As their choke hold fails, see the world light up in fireworks (fireworks)
Tonight we’re flying free, as soon as night time falls
Don't hang your head, in defeat
Oh we’re sneaking out, oh we’re stealing cars
Your mum is freaking out, let’s ditch this shit hole...
Coz if you fall, I will catch you
And if you jump, then I'll jump too
We’re gonna laugh out loud
We're gonna wear our scars proud
Tonight
Tonight, as we fly free
Ohh, tonight, will you hold me?
I guess we’re so confused, that we can’t possibly choose
What’s right for us, what's wrong for us
But I know, that you can choose your path
And I know, that we can make this right
If they just give us the chance
Give us a chance
Coz if you fall, I will catch you
And if you jump, then I'll jump too
We’re gonna laugh out loud
We're gonna wear our scars proud
Tonight
Tonight, we will break free
Oh tonight, and you will see
That this ain’t all that’s left of us
This ain’t what’s all to life
We will find the rest us
And bring ‘em back to life
Tonight
I will catch you
Tonight
Or I’ll jump too
Tonight
We’ll laugh out loud
Tonight
And wear them proud
Tonight
We’re breaking free
(Breaking free)
Tonight!
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Um not to be to rude but it wasnt that great.
This seems very similar to "Skyway Avenue" by We The Kings. If my guess is correct, I'd advise revising it as to not offend other 'We The Kings' listeners.
The subject matter is utterly predictable, and there's no real end, no real arc. I'm not a fan of this. Sorry.
GRADE: D
don't you have any music? if you do, please do post a link to some site.
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