Rosan

Sorry, I didn't really get what you were trying to say in this poem. It's quite vague and unclear. But it does project the feeling of a man going to ...

I liked it too. The first lines "The bridges we cross the roads we take. The cliché names we give our fate" was a good execution of the poem but ...

On the overalls, I don't think it is wise to use upper case throughout the whole thing especially since you use question and exclamation marks. On the first line of ...

Everyone says that the poem is great, they loved it and they described how wonderful it is. Their comments really got me interested in your work and it made want ...

For the errors, please correct your spelling of tomorrow in the second line. The rest is fine but the line "Upon re-opening his eyes," I think you should remove the ...

The only thing off that I noticed is the third line: "Permanent scars and bruises will forever remain," the use of both "permanent" and "will forever remain" makes it somehow ...

You know, it is funny how the poem synchronized with the symphony I was listening to while reading this. It is named "Big Love Adagio" by the band "Bond." They ...

This is really nice. I like how you made the words flow out so smoothly, almost naturally. There's no problem in it being long, I think it even complemented the ...

Even though it is supposed to be horror and mystery or suspense, yeah, I thought it was pretty funny. Don't take this wrongly though. What I find amusing was how ...

The concept of the first scene was somehow similar to the Disney cartoon "Mulan". It's on how the daughter went to fight for her father or in her father's stead ...

I admire your concept of devouring your kin, well, in the composition that is. It is good that you used free-verse, because there were no restrictions on the choice of ...

It was really expressive and was good, but there are a few things I have to point out. It's not something to be bothered about, just something I noticed. First ...