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This was a really interesting story!

Psh like anyone ever looks at those. >.>

I wasn't warned! you shoulda put it right in the title.

I like how this is rated 18+ for violence and mature content.

Life sounds delicious! :D

Thanks for your review and you kind words. And thanks for pointing out that little mistake. :)

Ha Ha! How ingenious! Posting a picture to keep the formatting. Nice. And good poem too. I feel like you described this countryside life really well. ^^

Thank you! And I've thought of it, but I'm not really sure how to publish my poems, or if I really want to, or if anyone would read them. (besides ...

It just means that you have eight syllables per line following the unstressed-stressed pattern of da DUM da DUM da DUM da DUM ^^

I honestly have no idea! :D

Hi Magenta, and thanks for the review! I will agree that the how the lines start gets a little repetitive. On almost all of my poems, I only capitalize when ...

Oh yes, now it makes more sense. That's a pretty cool idea, calling the screaming the shattering melodies. Now if you could convey this to the reader without this explanation. ...

To make your lines spaced correctly, you have to press Shift Enter (or return). That will make the space between the lines smaller. To mark stanzas, or to put a ...

This had some really wonderful imagery and a really dark, scary, AND lusty tone. I was draw into this poem by the title, which is a really fascinating concept. Great ...

oh oops! you're right! I guess I can't count. XD I missed the "of." Then great job!