Rook

oops this is what happens when you write something on notepad rather than word. Other than that and the last line (which I know has problems and I'm trying to ...

Aw thanks. ^_^ That last chapter was written in like an hour. It wasn't my best. >.>

Thank you for your continuing great reviews! Yeah this chapter needs some work. I'll try to implement what you said, and fix all these things. And Shep's family is a ...

Not a raven~ Think about the words that repeated most. ^_^ (other than I and and the like)

nope nope and nope! :D

Hee hee thanks! And nope. It's not a mirage or sunlight. ^_^

This was like, the best review I've ever recieved. I laughed, I cried, I wailed in agony at the unfairness of it all, but mostly I nodded and said "man ...

A silence of three parts? Do I smell "the name of the wind?" ;) This was beautiful.

This was great. A+ from me.

Thank you so much for your continuing reviews! :D So far this seems to be one big quest to get sheep. hee-hee If you told that to someone, using the ...

Yeah, I knew she was your sister. ^_^

Which Road is the card game Jay played with the trolls last chapter... maybe I should clarify. And thanks! :D

This hit me in the most wonderful of ways. Also, you're missing that snail/cricket/whatever little animals that play the music when something good happens. I wanted them to be included. ...

These are all such great ideas. ;-; Thank you very much!

Thank you so much for your review! Yes, this would be a lot better as a radio show, and I was imagining the character's voices would be very different and ...