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Also, if you want to put this into your poetry folder, you can still do that. You just have to go to the edit button, click submit, and then you'll ...

That meaning behind your poem is rather abstract. One of my personal rules-- and you don't have to follow this but I find it personally a good way to convey ...

I said "is it held" rather than "it is held" because "is it held" would still fit the old style you're writing with and wouldn't sound like a pirate stepped ...

Thank you for your very polite reply to this. I'm glad you have an open mind, and you're as entitled to your opinions as I am. I would like to ...

This was a good review, thank you! I made up a lot of words, and for some of them such as "benthic" or "Ankylosed" or "Bifurcatives" I took real words ...

Hey I wrote this BEFORE our moonglade thing. Thanks for the review, falco! :D

There are no fish in this. The point of the poem is that I made up words, or used existing words that don't make sense in the context. That's more ...

Aha, I see. And yes, I figured that's what the enjambment was about. I totally agree with you in that it's best the way you have it, even if it ...

Ah yes, that makes much more sense.

This is all the things I have wanted to say about your poetry but could not find the words for it. The faux depth.

hehe yeah I wrote it a while ago and just unearthed it

Also I really like Pocket's review, and she really hit on why I don't like the last two lines of the first stanza, and I agree with her on the ...

Thanks for your review! Marinescence is pronounced mare-in-es-ence. It's a word I made up to mean somewhere along the lines of the essence of the sea. It's like luminescence. c: ...

Interesting perspective.

The first thing you said was correct for why I said it was a dangerous feeling. Don't get your hopes up about the final part. It is a F-L-O-P. It's ...