Rook

Hello! This was a very interesting poem. I liked how different it was from ones I've seen. I like everything after the first little part. You use really good images, ...

Hello! I thought your poem was very cute. It's also very relatable, as many people struggle with these kinds of emotions. You're rather vague in this poem. I'm not quite ...

As I reviewed that, so will I review this. When you first read this, or at least the first two lines, they make absolutely no sense. Just read this out ...

Hello! I'm fortis and I'm here to review! I liked the concept of writing about time this way. I liked almost all of your little statements about time. They're very ...

Hello! I really liked this poem. It had some spectacular imagery. I especially liked the hot/cold imagery, and the way you presented it. This seemed like a train of thought ...

Hello Ajt! You told me to read this a while ago and I never did. So here I am. Personally, I liked the "One man's trash is another man's Marigold" ...

Hello Eli~ This was a lovely poem. These are some things I liked about it: -I really like the story. I know this comes from the Greek story, and that's ...

Hello~ I'm here to review your poem. Things I liked about this: -I liked the main message of thanking God for what he has given you -I liked your descriptions ...

Hello! This poem intrigues me. "I stare up at the sky" by using the word "stare," you show that this is really important to you. Worth more than a glance ...

Hello :) fortis here to do a review. (Pleas igonore how obvious that is) This was a very interesting poem. You had some nice sensory details such as "fur-covered boxing ...

Hello! :D I really liked this poem -I liked the whole concept of jelly beans. That word made this poem what it is I think, along with your repeating of ...

Hello! :D I want to say that I was really drawn by your title. "Water Coloured Body" attracted me first, because it's English with the "u." Second, I thought it ...

Hey Dr.Strangelove! I come for your poem! bwa-ha-haa! The things I liked about this poem: -I love the actual story. It's a unique. I've never seen something where the person ...

Hello :D These are some things I liked about the poem: -I like the colorful and vivid imagery such as the words "pearly," "colorful splash," "cringe in agony lash." They ...

Hello! :D Can I take this line by line? "My heart flies away" A very nice starting line. I like the light, care-free feeling it gives us. "Kissing the leaden ...