Rook

Hello! Just a quick review as I don't have time for a full one. I really liked your premise, wondering if you are the odd-one-out. I like the way you ...

Hi Gruffin! Can I just exactly what SereneSimpliciT said about bringing a smile to my face? I really really liked this poem, just like I really really like rain. There's ...

Hello~ the loxahatchee river is black as pitch: So, I have never heard of the Loxahatchee before, but I used my good friend google and it told me it was ...

Hello~ This poem was very interesting. I could say all kinds of good things, mostly about how natural your easy rhythm was, and you images were amazing. I especially like ...

I really really really loved this. It was so simple and beautiful and profound. Since it's fall, I got the fall smell of leaves when you said leaves in my ...

Hello Persy! This poem was beautiful. I haven't read (or seen, because it's a movie right?) Extremely Loud and Incredibly Close, so sorry if there's any references to that in ...

Hello! (WARNING: extensive coding ahead, beware) For you second poem ever, this is pretty good. You had some really good images and some nice poetic language. Really, I think most ...

Hello Persy. You first two lines definitely caught my attention. I don't generally read poems addressed to spiders. I found a little bit a humor in this especially "Please don't ...

Hello. I really enjoyed this poem. You had some great imagery and I liked the meaning behind it. The meaning IS "be careful that the decisions you make are good ...

Hello~ I'd like to put this into your sentences you you can read it without all the new lines getting in the way. "Her dreary whisper of an unfiltered blue, ...

Hello! I'd like to take this line by line, but I actually want to do it sentence by sentence just so you might see how I see it when I ...

Hi Nite! I really liked this poem! The whole story is wonderful and amazing and I love the meaning behind it and the lesson we can learn from it, and ...

Hello~ This was a nice simple poem, and I know it's like this because you wanted to try the cinquain format. But there is such thing as too simple. Don't ...

Hello! I really liked the first line of this poem. It was perfect in every way. Sometimes I think about how lines in my hand really do look like a ...

Hello! Mind if I take this line by line? "Everything has to be chaos/That’s just the way it is" This was a very nice way to start off the poem. ...