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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Retrospect

    Hello! Here to review for the poetry exchange! :) I thought this was a really interesting poem, I wasn't quite sure what to think of it as a whole though. ...

    Feb 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Today we say goodbye

    Hello! Here I am with my review from the poetry exchange! This was a sad poem :( You had some really fantastic imagery and you packed the emotion in deeply. ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Stained Glass Life

    Hello! Here I am with my promised review! I loved this poem, it was absolutely stunning. That said, there are a few things that could be fixed. First of all, ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: The Little Red Hen. (Poem, with a twist. On the rocks.)

    Heehee! That was a bit of a twist! One thing I'd tell you to watch is your rhythm. I think it would work so much better if it had a ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Grey as running Ink

    Hello! Here with my second review! First let me compliment your title. I love the color grey, (which I will refer to as gray for the sake of me referring ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Sound of Inspiration

    Hello! Here I am at last with your review! This was a very interesting poem: rich in imagery, and lots of colorful diction. I think you have something good going ...

    Feb 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Down and Out

    Hello! This was a simple little short poem. I like how is just so expressive with so few words, and I also like how it's not a structured poem like ...

    Feb 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Empty Palette

    Hello! I always love poems about painting, and yours was no exception. You use vivid imagery and beautiful words to convey your meaning. Very descriptive words too. I love the ...

    Feb 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Rusted Hearts

    Hello! This was a very interesting poem! Now I'm not quite sure what it was about, but for some reason it made me think of war, and also the song ...

    Feb 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: A Few Simple Words-Haiku

    Hello! I needed to reveiw something quick, so here's a quick review to a quick poem. Okay, so I love the topic. And you present it in a very simple ...

    Jan 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Gift of the Angel or Devil?

    Hello! First thing is very nit-picky and really you don't have to pay too much attention to this because it's my opinion only. You don't have to capitalize every line. ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Resurgent

    Hello! I think the coolest thing about this poem is that it is a real poem . I can't really explain it, but I've written poems like this before, it's ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Humor Re: An Essay on Society (from the perspective of a cat)

    I'm going to try to review this. My Cat is a little rusty though. (better go oil him! haha...) Okay, supposing this is supposed to be an actual essay, I'd ...

    Jan 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Remember when you loved me

    Hiya Pengu~ This was a really emotional and descriptive poem! I like it a lot. Can I take this line by line? Stand beneath the broken awning, So I think ...

    Jan 21, 2014
  • Lyrics » Narrative, Lyrical Re: International Tearducts On Parade

    Jell-o, friend. Here I am again, with a late review. I'm pretty sure I read this on your blog and I really liked it and it really meant something to ...

    Jan 13, 2014


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