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Re: Retrospect
Hello! Here to review for the poetry exchange! :) I thought this was a really interesting poem, I wasn't quite sure what to think of it as a whole though. ...
Feb 20, 2014 -
Re: Today we say goodbye
Hello! Here I am with my review from the poetry exchange! This was a sad poem :( You had some really fantastic imagery and you packed the emotion in deeply. ...
Feb 18, 2014 -
Re: Stained Glass Life
Hello! Here I am with my promised review! I loved this poem, it was absolutely stunning. That said, there are a few things that could be fixed. First of all, ...
Feb 18, 2014 -
Re: The Little Red Hen. (Poem, with a twist. On the rocks.)
Heehee! That was a bit of a twist! One thing I'd tell you to watch is your rhythm. I think it would work so much better if it had a ...
Feb 18, 2014 -
Re: Grey as running Ink
Hello! Here with my second review! First let me compliment your title. I love the color grey, (which I will refer to as gray for the sake of me referring ...
Feb 14, 2014 -
Re: The Sound of Inspiration
Hello! Here I am at last with your review! This was a very interesting poem: rich in imagery, and lots of colorful diction. I think you have something good going ...
Feb 13, 2014 -
Re: Down and Out
Hello! This was a simple little short poem. I like how is just so expressive with so few words, and I also like how it's not a structured poem like ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: Empty Palette
Hello! I always love poems about painting, and yours was no exception. You use vivid imagery and beautiful words to convey your meaning. Very descriptive words too. I love the ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: Rusted Hearts
Hello! This was a very interesting poem! Now I'm not quite sure what it was about, but for some reason it made me think of war, and also the song ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: A Few Simple Words-Haiku
Hello! I needed to reveiw something quick, so here's a quick review to a quick poem. Okay, so I love the topic. And you present it in a very simple ...
Jan 30, 2014 -
Re: Gift of the Angel or Devil?
Hello! First thing is very nit-picky and really you don't have to pay too much attention to this because it's my opinion only. You don't have to capitalize every line. ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Resurgent
Hello! I think the coolest thing about this poem is that it is a real poem . I can't really explain it, but I've written poems like this before, it's ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: An Essay on Society (from the perspective of a cat)
I'm going to try to review this. My Cat is a little rusty though. (better go oil him! haha...) Okay, supposing this is supposed to be an actual essay, I'd ...
Jan 24, 2014 -
Re: Remember when you loved me
Hiya Pengu~ This was a really emotional and descriptive poem! I like it a lot. Can I take this line by line? Stand beneath the broken awning, So I think ...
Jan 21, 2014 -
Re: International Tearducts On Parade
Jell-o, friend. Here I am again, with a late review. I'm pretty sure I read this on your blog and I really liked it and it really meant something to ...
Jan 13, 2014
