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Heyo! Well, I already enjoyed this poem once, and I don't see much that need fixin' So I'll just be veeery picky. who had an awkward face The way you ...

Hey, you asked for feedback, and I feel like you haven't gotten too much. That's probably because this, like all your poems are so magical to people who don't write ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! :D I think this was a very truthful poem that we can all relate to. There are a few typos here: barely detect by my self ...

Hello! This was dark and peaceful. I can say I enjoyed those two mixed feelings a lot. I think the title was a good introduction to this poem, so good ...

Hello~ This was rather a different poem. I thought it was interesting that you based this on a soundtrack. I have to say that the only song I know here ...

Hello! I can relate to this poem: I think a lot of people can. I loved the metaphor of the Easter eggs. It fit the poem perfectly. Your pacing was ...

Heyo skor! I'm here to save this from the ravenous clutches of the green room! I read the first stanza and said "hey that's a marionette!" Then I glanced at ...

Here I am, claws sharpened, ready to review this beautiful piece of loveliness. Also. Geez, I already liked this, but I didn't review it which usually means I didn't have ...

Hello! This was a beautiful and beautifully simple poem. The last line gave me shivers. Since this is short, I'll take it line by line. His humble pond cannot compare ...

Hello! :D Geez this was pretty... raw. There's a lot of emotion in this. It can be read in a way that is perfect for its tone, a sort of ...

Heya Nargles! :D I was just about to say my favorite line was the parenthetical "(love does too)," when I saw it was the title. Good choice. ^_^ I thought ...

Heyo! That song was the perfect way to start and end. Nit-picks (just for understandibility ;) ) As one the three men slashed through their sleeves and into their forearms, ...

Hello! I'm here again~ I just realized how beautiful these would look in a book. Like on a page in a solid book somewhere. So "gaius" doesn't mean anything else ...

Hello. Interesting work. I'm not quite sure how to review this, but here I am. It's gotta get out of the green room somehow. I think the enormous type-face and ...

This was beautiful. Also if was funny if I read it as this person loves coffee so much that they write "coffee" on fogged mirrors. But I'll try to look ...