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Re: Kingdom of Nine
Hello! I love songs used in novels. They have such an ancient and deep reverberating vibe. BUT you have to do them right. I agree that poems like this should ...
Jan 8, 2015 -
Re: Lovesick is a Disease
Hello Interesting poem... I'm sorry if this is really personal and I'm not kind enough, but here we go. I thought this is rather cliche. It reminded me of the ...
Jan 8, 2015 -
Re: there was a time when my friends included everyone who smiled back
Hi! I love this poem. It speaks to me on a personal level, because I think I went through pretty much the same thing, and I see a lot of ...
Jan 8, 2015 -
Re: Inside a Sheep Skull
Hello again Moo! I always enjoy your poetry. So, Sheep skulls are kind of omens for evil aren't they? Or like a ram head is used as a symbol for ...
Jan 7, 2015 -
Re: One Moment
Hello! I promised I would review this, and then I didn’t, so I’m here now at least. So, I love pantoums. Don’t worry, this poetry style was not lost on ...
Jan 1, 2015 -
Re: Deleted 52
Hey Lumi. I figured I would save this from the green room. Hope you don't mind. I'll tell you right now that I haven't read any of the LotR books ...
Dec 22, 2014 -
Re: Untitled (For Now)
Hello! Interesting poem you have here. The words and images are intriguing, but I'm afraid that I must say I don't understand it. I understand the overarching themes of release-- ...
Dec 22, 2014 -
Re: Nicoteen
Hello! Usually I don't like rhymes, but in this poem, I definitely appreciate them. This reads like it's a rap-- it's a rather short rap, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. ...
Dec 21, 2014 -
Re: Music Mind
Hello! This was an interesting poem: I like the concept. So "is" and "gifts" don't exactly rhyme, though I appreciate your effort. The lines that you made rhyme read as ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: An Illustration to: The Womb of My Affections
Hello, I've never reviewed just an image before, so we'll see how this goes. The quality of this drawing is good, I can understand right away what it is, and ...
Dec 19, 2014 -
Re: Save him from this darkness
Hello! This is just the right kind of poem for me to review right now. I can see this is personal, so I'll try to go easy on you. First, ...
Dec 19, 2014 -
Re: Where I'm From (for class)
Hello! I probably didn't get this to you in time, but here I am. I loved this poem. It was a beautiful read. You have delicious memories. Let's just go ...
Dec 10, 2014 -
Re: I Know A Place
This was a cute little poem. I like the idea of it, and it made me go “awhhh” :3 A few technical things: Where the heart still grows, I think ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: maybe God will turn us into galaxies in heaven
Poooomp! :D Beautiful poem as always. I can’t get enough of your beautiful words and masterful symbols and delicious imagery. This poem seemed to jump around a bit though, and ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Frozen in Time
Hi satira~ I liked this poem a lot actually. I like the idea behind it. I find it strange that you capitalize “every” and “It” and then leave everything else ...
Nov 30, 2014
