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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Kingdom of Nine

    Hello! I love songs used in novels. They have such an ancient and deep reverberating vibe. BUT you have to do them right. I agree that poems like this should ...

    Jan 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Lovesick is a Disease

    Hello Interesting poem... I'm sorry if this is really personal and I'm not kind enough, but here we go. I thought this is rather cliche. It reminded me of the ...

    Jan 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: there was a time when my friends included everyone who smiled back

    Hi! I love this poem. It speaks to me on a personal level, because I think I went through pretty much the same thing, and I see a lot of ...

    Jan 8, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Inside a Sheep Skull

    Hello again Moo! I always enjoy your poetry. So, Sheep skulls are kind of omens for evil aren't they? Or like a ram head is used as a symbol for ...

    Jan 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: One Moment

    Hello! I promised I would review this, and then I didn’t, so I’m here now at least. So, I love pantoums. Don’t worry, this poetry style was not lost on ...

    Jan 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fanfiction Re: Deleted 52

    Hey Lumi. I figured I would save this from the green room. Hope you don't mind. I'll tell you right now that I haven't read any of the LotR books ...

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Untitled (For Now)

    Hello! Interesting poem you have here. The words and images are intriguing, but I'm afraid that I must say I don't understand it. I understand the overarching themes of release-- ...

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Nicoteen

    Hello! Usually I don't like rhymes, but in this poem, I definitely appreciate them. This reads like it's a rap-- it's a rather short rap, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. ...

    Dec 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Music Mind

    Hello! This was an interesting poem: I like the concept. So "is" and "gifts" don't exactly rhyme, though I appreciate your effort. The lines that you made rhyme read as ...

    Dec 20, 2014
  • Art » Romantic, Dramatic Re: An Illustration to: The Womb of My Affections

    Hello, I've never reviewed just an image before, so we'll see how this goes. The quality of this drawing is good, I can understand right away what it is, and ...

    Dec 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Save him from this darkness

    Hello! This is just the right kind of poem for me to review right now. I can see this is personal, so I'll try to go easy on you. First, ...

    Dec 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Where I'm From (for class)

    Hello! I probably didn't get this to you in time, but here I am. I loved this poem. It was a beautiful read. You have delicious memories. Let's just go ...

    Dec 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: I Know A Place

    This was a cute little poem. I like the idea of it, and it made me go “awhhh” :3 A few technical things: Where the heart still grows, I think ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: maybe God will turn us into galaxies in heaven

    Poooomp! :D Beautiful poem as always. I can’t get enough of your beautiful words and masterful symbols and delicious imagery. This poem seemed to jump around a bit though, and ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Health Re: Frozen in Time

    Hi satira~ I liked this poem a lot actually. I like the idea behind it. I find it strange that you capitalize “every” and “It” and then leave everything else ...

    Nov 30, 2014


Anger is an acid that can do more harm to the vessel in which it is stored than to anything on which it is poured.
— Mark Twain