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Re: Why Me?
Isn't that quote by 2Pac? :P Hello! I'm about to be brutally honest, so take this with a grain of salt, and just know I'm here to help you improve! ...
Mar 6, 2015 -
Re: The Hammer in my Head
Hello! Welcome to YWS by the way~ I want to let you know right now that I've never had a migrane-- I don't even get headaches-- so I am probably ...
Mar 3, 2015 -
Re: Pretty words, Ugly reality
Hey there! I really like this concept. You have a cool thing here, but I think some things could be tweaked. I don't know if this is an autobiographical account ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Survivors
Hello I like the definition concept. This was an interesting poem, but there were a few things that bothered me. First, I can't speak for your experiences, but for me ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Drinking Song No.4
Hello I don't know why I enjoy your drinking songs so much. XD With this one, you have a very focused subject, and I really like how clear you were ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Malted Green and Rotting Fingertips
Heeey! First and foremost: Are you sure you mean "malted?" Perhaps you mean "molted" or "mottled?" Mottled seems to fit in a lot better with the rest of the poem, ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Tunes
Hello! You have a simple little poem here. ^^ That said, I feel like I hear this poem pretty often. There are many poems dedicated to how music makes the ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: where were you
Heya~ I totally understand the sentiments in this poem You have some things in here that are not... typical, grammar wise, so if they were intentional, don't mind me, but ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Look Away
Heyo, I know this is super old, but I figured you should get a review, right? I can totally relate to this, as it happens all the time to me. ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Crustaceans
Hello! You know, there's always some sort of connotation with the word "crustaceans" that gives it a certain emotion just to hear that word. Maybe that's me. Anyway, I think ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: The Little Boy
Hello! Okay, so this has a lot of good in it, and, unfortunately, a lot of bad. But no worries! The bad is easily fixed, and perhaps it was purposeful. ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Dear Princess
Heyo, here for that second WRFF requested review. Kay, so I'm not sure I really understand this at all. I can grasp an innuendo here, but I'm not sure if ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Sowing Seeds
Oh my. I think those two words are a pretty accurate reaction to this. So, very cool concept here. I like it a lot. Death is a gardener that reaps ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Around
Hello! Interesting idea. I personally appreciate that this reads correctly widdershins *cough cough*, but I think most people would be inclined to read it clockwise, no? Maybe you should change ...
Feb 17, 2015 -
Re: Quotes Yet to be Quoted- 01
Hey, so I don't really understand this at all. Do you want people to quote this, or what? What do you even mean by a "quote?" A quote is something ...
Feb 15, 2015
