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I'm sorry for how long it took me to get to this, but I want you to know that this is still the first thing that I've reviewed all april ...

Darn it, I was going to get a green room review for this. Oh well. A few small things: Tyler let me out a small giggle The "me" in this ...

Hello! I like this poem. It's simple, and it has a really personal message that I'm sure many people can relate to. First, titles are pretty important, and I highly ...

Hello! Let's take this stanza by stanza, ja? I love your title. It's what drew me in in the first place. First stanza: I like the allusion to ancient tribal ...

Hello! I think this was a rather sweet poem, but there are a few things that I think could use clarifying. First of all, who is never forgetting who? In ...

Hello! You said this was only a bit religious, but to me it reads very religious. That's okay though. I always have a hard time relaying my religious beliefs in ...

Hello~ This song felt really sad, but it felt a little vague to me. I suppose this is fine, as lyrics mean different things to everyone, and aren't generally as ...

Hello! I swear that you said that you didn't like nature poetry. But if this is anything but a nature poem, I'll eat my metaphorical hat. I personally really like ...

Hey dragon! This was a somber poem. Very thought-provoking. I am reminded for the grave of the unknown soldier, and wonder if that's what inspired this. As this is a ...

Hello! This was... really interesting. It had a sort of haunting quality to it, and reminded me of several things: biblical verses (specifically psalms), riddles, songs in fantasy books, and ...

Hello! Interesting poem here. It consists of mostly symbolism, and I like the symbols you incorporated, however, I feel there could be much improved. Firstly, this seems like it ended ...

Hello! I've always loved the story of troy, and I like that you've written a poem based on it. This poem wasn't very strong, though. I think most of it ...

Hello! I think what's pulling this back from your usual quality is that you have a lot of extra words that aren't tied down to anything. Usually, you don't stick ...

Hello! Let's take this stanza by stanza. First, why the ampersands? They make me wonder if I'm supposed to say "and" between ever stanza. If they're just there to look ...

Hello~ So the way you have this separated into two lines and such makes me want all the lines to rhyme, so maybe think of changing the way that this ...