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Re: No Mo[u]rning
Hello! I figured I'd give you a review on this since it's been sitting around for so long! This kind of poem appeals to me very much. These are the ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Pete's Feet
Hello! So this has been sitting around for a while, so I'mma review it the best I can. Shel Silverstein is a great poet. ^^ Okay, aside from the strangeness ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: internal problems
Hey Steg! here to fulfill your WRFF request! :) So, what you have here is very interesting. The theme, topic, and mood here is much to my liking, but there ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: eb and flow
Hello! This poem has a lot of sweet sentiments that I feel a lot of us can relate to. Most people have been left behind by someone or other they ...
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: Glimpsing Infinity
Hey verser! I'm here to fulfill that WRFF request you made. SO! Interesting piece you have here. I can see that you put a lot of thought and effort into ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Sunset
Hello! Quick review because I have to pack and be on my merry way. I really like this. It's an old concept, but a good one, and you have nice ...
Sep 30, 2015 -
Re: dragonfly days
Hello! So I like what you're doing here. You've got some awesome images. I'm always a sucker to nature images, and I love dragonflies especially, so your title caught my ...
Sep 30, 2015 -
Re: Tears of Blood
Hello. So I'm going to be honest with you because I know I personally like honest reviews. But always remember that this is my personal opinion and you have the ...
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: Angels
Hallo Okay... So you already know this is pretty bad... >.> First, the grammar was pretty not good. I mean, I know there's no punctuation in this at all, but ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Deleted.
Hello! This was a cute, simple poem. There are a couple things I think you could improve, however. This reads as very I/me. Like, it only really focuses on the ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Leftovers
Hello! I don't know what you're talking about when you said this was bad or something. This is great. Still, I will rip as much as I can. And not ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: the Edge of love
Hiya! So this definitely has an awesome concept to it, and the voice behind it is so human, gentle, and simple. I like the tone very much. I think one ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Deaf
Hey hippy! I really like this. You're a really talented poet. I really like the images of this, and how they flow together, and how vivid they are. It's a ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Foolish
Hello! Okay, so I'm here to give you a review, and I'm going to be completely honest, so don't let this review get you down. I'm trying to be helpful. ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: infinity and I
Hiya! This is quite an interesting poem. I thought the images you had here were thought-provoking. However, I do think there are some things that could be improved. For one, ...
Sep 27, 2015
