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Re: My spectrum
thank you for this encouraging review. i will ccorrect the typos..
Jun 17, 2015 -
Re: My spectrum
thank you for the review but i suppose you have mistaken with my theme. its about the seven colours of rainbow, the different situations that we face which include both ...
Jun 17, 2015 -
Re: I can sing it loud
thank you for this review. i am personally not far enough from disappointment from my own work so i don't mind other pointing out that it isn't the best. i ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: Intimidated yet unconquered
thank you for this review. and by the word paced i meant ignited, or speeded up. for further reference please check my reply on niteowl's post. thank you again for ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: Intimidated yet unconquered
thank you, your review was very helpful. by the word " paced" i meant ignited, or rather burned it brighter, comparing it with a car that just increased its seeped ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: Dreams
its easy first give a colon : and then a capital D , P etc, according to your wish. remember, don't keep any space between these characters. :D
May 28, 2015 -
Re: Intimidated yet unconquered
thank you for the appreciation. if you remember any cons that you noticed please let me know :D
May 23, 2015 -
Re: I can sing it loud
last question of yours gets the first answer- no, i have never ever written songs before. i have a rhythm in mind to be true that is why some lines ...
May 17, 2015 -
Re: I can sing it loud
thank you for this encouragement, i would try my to do better next time
May 17, 2015 -
Re: I can sing it loud
thank you, its actually my first time and even i am not fully satisfied..
May 17, 2015 -
Re: Tinkles of the past
thank you . your review was really helpful. i would certainly make the corrections
Apr 27, 2015 -
Re: I don't aim at heaven
thank you very much. i would try to correct my cons and make it even better.
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: so cliched!
this was very funny , good observation i must admit. "Vampires have grown up No sucking or falling in love"- this was the best line i found. the full poem ...
Apr 12, 2015 -
Re: Estrangement from desires
thank you, i will take care of the parts your pointed out
Apr 5, 2015 -
Re: Stoop to conquor
thank you for the review , and stoop to conquer is a phrase which means to get something we must persevere.
Mar 31, 2015
