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Re: Dead (Climbing Rhyme)
The poem is just fantastic and i hardly find points to nitpick. its not a remark just a curious question- what is a climbing rhyme? as i didn't really find ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: The Crying Game
The poem is really good, i liked your use of imagery and the bold description. however , i would suggest a few nitpicks- "Lacing the metal white casing of pills ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Poems
Quite an emphasis about poems, i like your poem, but i would like to do my nitpicking first before the appreciation "Poems of naught but loves sweet kiss"- i think ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Unreachable Dreams
this poem was really good. i liked your style and the lyrical tune. "But every night I hear the same old song A song which tells a story never ending, ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Dreaming
I liked your brief and short work, your self contradiction is evident however. the poem has a charm of its own- its two face to same thought. stepping on to ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Pretty words, Ugly reality
hi Inked , heard from you after long. so, i liked your work and it really juxtaposed faced of reality and fake. the story is beautiful, but again is it ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Relief
is this a song or a poem, the chorus part is a bit confusing. okay so for the review, i quite like your work, thought it not fantastic but yet ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Photograph Family
I like the way you are explaining various phases of a plain photograph seeing its inner story and beauty. but for the nitpick- "Each picture contains a story that expresses ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Hectic Septic
nice story and i like the theme. its good that even your school teachers encourage you in writing poems. i just want to have few nitpicks- "slimy spot's not what ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: Mistakes Were Made.
look frankly speaking your poem was quite a bore.... i truly don't have any intention to be rude but you see that this was not a poem at all. it ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: The Most Dramatic of Exits
I just loved your poem. it was full of cheer and it encoded a positive message. i appreciate the brief, simple yet too strong style. I get a full idea ...
Mar 27, 2015 -
Re: The Naive tree
I liked your poem , both the tone and the message. i even liked that you tried to tell a complete story. i can easily rank it among some of ...
Mar 27, 2015 -
Re: Katie's Poem
the poem was really cute and i liked your message. however i had a confusion about the rhyming scheme. you see at times you made it rhyming and then it ...
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: the milkman
the poem is not only humorous but a strong satire. i like your use of words and your hinting at broader aspects. i would however suggest rectification at some points- ...
Mar 22, 2015 -
Re: Dont Go Away
your poem is cute but it has its faults. I am apologizing before hand i am quite grumpy now and may not sound all honey and cup cakes, but i ...
Mar 22, 2015
