RituparnaBhowmik

like your there, and perhaps what you wanted to say.your thoughts are not really very clear and at times you are self contradictory so you have grounds for improvement. i ...

First of all, good trick to stitch the punch lines from the songs to spin a poem. however you must know that this doesn't always have to work. i think ...

i liked your poem, this is quite a big problem that we face at present times. i specifically liked the title - "mad hatters" and how you connect to it ...

wow that was a good piece. your title is very interesting and so is your poem. i like the use of quotations to say his words and brackets to show ...

this is something different that you have presented over here. it is quite interesting and i like your use of words. your poem just came alive and its very vivid ...

The poem is quite good. this is the perfect sonnet in all sense that i have seen so far on YMS. i liked your way of looking at things and ...

this is the truth of life you see. phrases like " make hay when the sun shines " were not devised in a day. i really liked this poem of ...

great work and beautiful theme. i really liked the first part of your poem as it went in a smooth flow opening like a story. however the flow was a ...

Its fantastic. i mean wow how can someone write it in such simple terms. this is the best description of love at first sight i have ever had. okay now ...

it is really interesting to see something different. but first of all "(n);" is that an emoticon or rather what should have been an emoticon. well as it doesn't appear ...

hi donizback, it has been days since i reviewed your work. so lets directly jump to the nitpick- "My trust on you is so much strong, I live my life ...

i liked this poem of yours, it is quite childish but beautiful nevertheless. now stepping to the nitpicking without wasting much time- "A beautiful abyss of grace"- the word ''abyss'' ...

hey Tigerlilly37, i liked your sweet poem. i really liked the way you wrote- ''From Word To Word"- opps when i pasted it the effect was gone , anyway i ...

the poem is quite dramatic, the use of old English like " thee" and " hath " made it quite rich , but at places it is overdone. for the ...

that was so sweet to read, a cute love story. i liked your style of keeping lines short, it a good trick to make the readers read a quite long ...