Rincewind

"Norman muttered to himself looking from his boarding pass to the seats upholstered alternately in orange, purple, and other shades of tacky." I love that line. Boni Bee didn't get ...

sorry sweet-heart, but Greendays days of punk are long gone. It seems the essence of punk music has been lost to this generation, but you;ve gotta understand that the stuff ...

Umm. Pretty graphic. Good enough, but easy with the fucking her with the knife and slicing the folds of her cunt stuff dude. I think if you are gonna swear ...

Pretty solid joke. I've heard the same one only different, it went: A native woman is sitting in here teep pee by teh fire with her three children. The eldest ...

Ive read tons of Terry Pratchett. Rediculous amounts really. Saying that he is trying to hard to be humerous is a seriously lame thing to say, and I think it ...

Thats not even a bad word, for pete's sakes be realistic. I want to again argue that I do not find this poem boring at all. And the "you were ...

Her mother’s voice was stern, unrelenting. Yes, Mother, you did, and I have brought some back to you Her two best friends. Two people who thought like her. Leaders who ...

I'm totally confused. The surgeon is stupid? I thought the dialgoue was pretty good. Nice flow at least, but I don't understand what happens at the end. I am getting ...

Holy crap this story is absolutely friggin fantastic. Awesome work hun. This story is my favourite thing I've read since I came to this site (sorry to say I've only ...

Same said exactly what I was going to with one point. There is a bunch of wild stuff going on, and the characters whose percpective the entire story is in ...

At the end you wrote. "Who are you?" it asked me. Is that supposed to be the griffon talking? And why is the griffon like a wrestling referee? dont the ...

Good luck. If you think everyones gonna crit every paragraph of everything, this isnt the best place to come. You have to give it time and get people interested in ...

That's fuckin awesome. I like the point of view in the narrative. "Jenny says what is that. I say it’s bark from a tree and she says oh. I crush ...

That one was full of one liners too. The last one was awesome but this one was better. Beaker started talking though. Which didnt make sense? The whole plot was ...

"Horrified, disgusted, and for some strange reason slightly turned on, Gonzo lost his grip on the edge, and fell into the blades as well." "The Sweedish chef did however recieve ...